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My Arabic homework 12/04/2014 I was asked by my teacher to write a few sentences in MSA for homework using some of the verbs and vocabulary I've learned. If you all have any corrections or tips, please do share and thanks advance! يذهب محمد إلى عمله في نيو يورك أيضاً Mohamed goes to his work in New York also. اختي لا تشرب حليب لانه إسيوية My sister does not drink milk because she is Asian. هل سوف تكتبين رسالة طويلة له Will you (fem.) write a long letter to him? أريد الذي الكتاب كبير فوقك I want the big book that is above you. سوف اذهب إلى الجزيرة صغيرة بالمركب الصاحب الفندق I will go to the small island with the boat of the owner of the hotel. أقول له إن كل شيء مسل I tell him that everything is fun.
Apr 14, 2014 6:00 AM
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My Arabic homework 12/04/2014

I was asked by my teacher to write a few sentences in MSA for homework using some of the verbs and vocabulary I've learned. If you all have any corrections or tips, please do share and thanks advance!

يذهب محمد إلى عمله في نيو يورك أيضاً
Mohamed goes to his work in New York also.

( A good verbal sentence )

اختي لا تشرب حليب لانه إسيوية
My sister does not drink milk because she is Asian. 

( you should add the to milk in arabic  = الحليب unless you're going to add another word to " milk " e.g cow's milk etc " .

" becuase she is " you have to use the feminine suffix ها to refer to your sisiter, so the correct form will be لأنها 


 
هل سوف تكتبين رسالة طويلة له
Will you (fem.) write a long letter to him?
( you can use either سوف or س . both are correct )


أريد الذي الكتاب كبير فوقك
I want the big book that is above you.
( adjective - subject agreement here : there's a " the " before the book so you have to add " the " to the noun and the adjective in arabic : الكتاب الكبير

Relative clauses in arabic have the same order as in English. So

I want the big book that is above you  = أريد الكتاب الكبير الذي فوقك


سوف اذهب إلى الجزيرة صغيرة بالمركب الصاحب الفندق
I will go to the small island with the boat of the owner of the hotel

( Again, the small island - you have to add the to the noun and its adjective in arabic : الجزيرة الصغيرة

Also

There's no equivlant to " of " in Arabic, but we order the words as they are in english . All words must be without " the " except the last word ( you should add " the " to it. 

So the boat of the owner of the hotelمركب صاحب الفندق
 
أقول له إن كل شيء مسل
I tell him that everything is fun.

( it's better to make this sentence nominal by adding " إن "

so the sentence will be like إنني أقول له أن كل شيء مسل

Just to make it sound better :)

 

Hope this helps you.

April 15, 2014
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My Arabic homework 12/04/2014

I was asked by my teacher to write a few sentences in MSA for homework using some of the verbs and vocabulary I've learned. If you all have any corrections or tips, please do share and thanks advance!

يذهب محمد إلى عمله في نيو يورك أيضاً
Mohamed goes to his work in New York also.

أختي لا تشرب الحليب لأنها آسيوية
My sister does not drink milk because she is Asian.

هل ستكتبين رسالة طويلة له؟
Will you (fem.) write a long letter to him?

أريد الكتاب الكبير الذي هو فوقك.
I want the big book that is above you.

سوف أذهب إلى الجزيرة الصغيرة بمركب صاحب الفندق.
I will go to the small island with the boat of the owner of the hotel.

أقول له أن كل شيء مسل
I tell him that everything is fun.

April 19, 2014
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My Arabic homework 12/04/2014

I was asked by my teacher to write a few sentences in MSA for homework using some of the verbs and vocabulary I've learned. If you all have any corrections or tips, please do share and thanks advance!

يذهب محمد إلى عمله في نيويورك أيضاً
Mohamed goes to his work in New York also.

اختي لا تشرب حليب لأنها آسيوية
My sister does not drink milk because she is Asian.

هل سوف ستكتبين رسالة طويلة له
Will you (fem.) write a long letter to him?

أريد الذي الكتاب الكبير فوق  ( the best translation for "above you" is فوق, it's better than فوقك, it's like saying "on you"
I want the big book that is above you.

سوف أذهب إلى الجزيرة الصغيرة بمركب صاحب الفندق
I will go to the small island with the boat of the owner of the hotel.

أقول له إن كل شيء مسل
I tell him that everything is fun.

 

لقد أبليت حسنا

عملا موفّقا مارك :)

April 14, 2014
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My Arabic homework 12/04/2014

I was asked by my teacher to write a few sentences in MSA for homework using some of the verbs and vocabulary I've learned. If you all have any corrections or tips, please do share and thanks advance!

يذهب محمد إلى عمله في نيويورك أيضاً
Mohamed goes to his work in New York also.

اختي لا تشرب حليب لانها إسيوية
My sister does not drink milk because she is Asian.

هل سوف تكتبين رسالة طويلة له

Better to Say (هل سوف تكتبين له رسالة طويلة)
Will you (fem.) write a long letter to him?

أريد الكتاب كبير الذي فوقك
I want the big book that is above you.

سوف اذهب إلى الجزيرة صغيرة بمركب صاحب الفندق
I will go to the small island with the boat of the owner of the hotel.

أقول له إن كل شيء مسل
I tell him that everything is fun.

April 16, 2014
You're Arabic is pretty good but you need to work on definite articles (ال التعريف) a little bit more
April 19, 2014
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