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你很无聊吗? 唉, 有两台电脑游戏机,一台笔记本电脑,一个箱子摆满了各种玩具和游戏,两个自行车,几百本书,一个很大的蹦床,也有艺术品多得数也数不过来,都让我是一个不好的妈妈,而你没有什么事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它们都带走了,你来看看你能做什么。这样你才会明白无聊的感觉啊! So, 2 computer games consoles, a laptop, an overflowing chest of games and toys, 2 bikes, hundreds of books, a trampoline, and more art stuff than you can shake a stick at, makes me a terrible mother and means you have nothing to do. Right oh, boy. Lets see how much you have to do if I take it all away. Then you'll really know the meaning of bored!!
Apr 14, 2014 3:52 PM
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你很無聊嗎?
唉, 有兩台電腦遊戲機,一台筆記本電腦,一個箱子擺滿了各種玩具和遊戲(建議寫法:一個擺滿了各種玩具和遊戲的箱子。 "A of B" we usually translate to "B的A"),兩自行車(單車的單位是「輛」或「臺」),幾百本書,一個很大的蹦床(彈簧床),也有藝術品多得數也數不過來,讓我是一個不好的媽媽(建議寫法:變成一個糟糕的媽媽。Even you didn't use "became", but we still need to insert a verb),而你沒有什麼事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它們都帶走了,你來看看你能做什麼。這樣你才會明白無聊的感覺啊!

 

※ Well done :)

April 14, 2014

你很无聊吗?

唉, 有两台电脑游戏机,一台笔记本电脑,一个箱子装(摆means exhibit, 装means fill the case with stuff)满了各种玩具和游戏,两自行车,几百本书,一个很大的蹦床,也有艺术品多得数也数不过来,都让我是一个不好的妈妈,而你没有什么事情可做!好的,小男孩。要是我把它们都带走了,你来看看你能做什么。这样你才会明白无聊的感觉啊!

Do you really take all the stuff away? Or you are just bluffing to help your kids grow up. 

So, 2 computer games consoles, a laptop, an overflowing chest of games and toys, 2 bikes, hundreds of books, a trampoline, and more art stuff than you can shake a stick at, makes me a terrible mother and means you have nothing to do. Right oh, boy. Lets see how much you have to do if I take it all away. Then you'll really know the meaning of bored!!

April 16, 2014
你的汉语很棒。但是还是要注意下数量词的搭配哦
April 15, 2014
an overflowing chest of games and toys .一个箱子摆(or盛、装)满了各种玩具和游戏。我觉得你说的很准确。或者也可以这样说:各种玩具和游戏多得连一个箱子都快放不下了。 你的汉语越来越地道natural了,不错。
April 15, 2014
Honestly , I'm not quite understand what makes yo a terrible mother,both English and Chinese : (
April 14, 2014
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