Any child can be taught to become a good sports person/musician or only people with talents?

This essay will argue that, despite the fact that some people may have some gifted abilities, all of others anyone else can become as good (as talented) as them by continuously practicing in later life. It will begin with telling explaining the fact that there do exist some talented persons people who which are good for at sports or music. Then it will argue that ordinary people also have the chance to become successful in sports or in musician.

There are a large number of gifted people in history. They perform much better by contracting engaging with other people in the same quantity of practice and they are born to love sports or music. Like Mozart, he was able to compose music when he was only 3 years old. It was impossible for others to compete with him at such a young age.

However, a certain talent is more a gift to make your life easier, rather than a necessity to become an excellent sports person or musician. A better family environment also has a huge impression on the child. People are more likely to be successful if they find their interests in their infancy. The famous Chinese snooker player, Ding Junhui, was not born with any talent, but his father lead him to become successful.

Teaching method also plays an important role. Improper methods of teaching may not help people to become outstanding. Counterproductively, they will ruin the talents and make the students lose their interests. Most famous athletes have a group of researchers providing them the best practice methods. And Musicians are often try to be students of masters. With better ways of teaching or practicing, any personal has the possibility to be of becoming famous.

Talented people have the privileges to succeed, but others still have their ways a chance/an opportunity to be as good as those talented people.

Your body paragraphs are good- they explain your point of view very clearly.  I understand your introductory pararaph, but I made a few grammatical changes that strengthen it.

Nice work!