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Olive oil I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars. Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. When the first time I used olive oil, it's so strange. My sister mock me about what i do every night. When I arrived in home after six months lived on boarding house, my sister said to me " your acne scars more small right now ". Wow, olive oil very usefull for someone who has acnes on face.
Apr 17, 2014 6:06 AM
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I've used olive oil as a moisturizer, too. It's true-- it's very good for your skin!
April 18, 2014

Olive oil

I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars.
Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. The first time I used olive oil, it was so strange. My sister mocked me about what i did every night.
When I arrived home after six months lived on boarding house, my sister said to me " your acne scars are smaller now ". Wow, olive oil is very useful for someone who has acne on their face.

April 18, 2014
oh an it's lived at/in (a) boarding house, 'on' is used when talking about doing something out of something, most cases being figurative. for example: he lived on houses for 5 years (meaning he made a living/profit off it) Sam was roaming the derelict valleys on his brother's allowance (he used his bro's savings/income) But if someone says that one lived on benches than I either think that he literaly slept on them or he made some cash off this *______*
April 18, 2014
*about what I did/have done/was doing
April 18, 2014

Olive oil

I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars.
Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. When the first time I used olive oil, it was/twas (it happened in the past so 'past simple' :D so strange. My sister mocked me about what I did/have donewas doing every night. (you could alternatively use 'used to mock me' (past participle))
When I arrived (at) home after six months (having) lived on (a) boarding house (I've taken boarding house as (an) entity, eg.: patience, valor, dominance, enmity and so on :))

my sister said to me" your acne scars are more small/smaller right now". (for more impact you can say much smaller)

Wow, olive oil's/ oil isvery useful for someone who has acne on face.

Note: things in brackets are obviously optional :)

 

April 18, 2014
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