Aureli Sánchez
A review of a record The Bravos, a Spanish rock and pop band which sing in English, have published their second record, one year after the success of their first one. In this LP it's possible to find interesting songs influenced by British bands such as Oasis. They don't make catchy tunes, but the message of their lyrics is compromised with the environment and other social problems. The most enjoyable of this record is the performance of Lucas, their guitarist, who is probably the best musician of The Bravos. He has composed all the songs and how dominates his instrument is simply amazing. From my point of view, buying their last record is a good choice because they are a wonderful band which produce excellent songs and thoughtful lyrics. I believe this record is going to be a cult one for collectors. And the best news is that this band is growing up, so they may produce very good records in the next years.
Apr 18, 2014 6:12 AM
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As usual, your English is very good. I'll just offer a few corrections:

Not "compromised with" but
"commtted to." "Compromised by" (not "with") has a completely different meaning in English, with negative connotations.

The most enjoyable part (In English, we never use a singular adjective without a noun.)

"... how he masters his instrument..." (Rule: always use an explicit subject -- the only exception is the imperative) or better, re-word it to use a possessive adjective and a (substantive) noun: "his mastery of the guitar...."

 

April 18, 2014
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