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are these sentences correct? 1) In Padua I attended a preparatory language course to get ready for the experience abroad. In Leipzig I attended a German course offered by the host organitation which allowed me to get integrated in the new environment and I received support from the send and host organitation. Furthermore, the host organitation suggested me a daily language course to follow to improve my communicative skills. 2) In addition to the language courses they were completely helpful and quick to answer all my questions and to give me detailed informations about everything (they gave me a map of the city's transports, they accompanied me during my first days etc.) 3) I refreshered my German language and looking for information about the city and its transports 4) The host organitation was always ready to answer our questions and to give us all the information we needed. Furthermore, the collaboration between the host and the sending organitation was very strong. 5) During the internship I acquired new skills that can be supportive in my future work, I met a lot of people and I had the possibility to improve my English and my German language. At home, I found a lot of support from my flatmates and through them I have learned the political and social conditions of a lot of Nations (in particolar the Balcans), different traditions and points of view. I feel more mature and wise now.
Apr 18, 2014 9:04 AM
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Are these sentences correct?

 

1)    In Padua, I attended a preparatory language course to get ready for the experience of going abroad.
In Leipzig, I attended a German course offered by the host organization which allowed me to get integrated in the new environment and I received support from the <s>send and</s> host organization. Furthermore, the host organization suggested <s>me</s> a daily language course for me to follow to improve my communicative skills.

2) In addition to the language courses <s>they</s> the host organization offers <s>were completely </s>which were helpful <s>and</s> the organization was quick to answer all my questions and to give me detailed information about everything (they gave me a map of the city's <s>transports </s>transportation system, they accompanied me during my first days etc.)

3) I refreshed my German language skills and <s>looking</s> looked for information about the city and its <s>transports</s> transportation system.

4) The host organization was always ready to answer our questions and to give us all the information we needed. Furthermore, the collaboration between the host and the sending organization was very strong.

5) During the internship I acquired new skills that can be supportive in my future work, I met a lot of people and I had the <s>possibility</s> opportunity to improve my English and my German language skills.
At home, I found a lot of support from my flat mates and through <s>them</s> they and I have learned about the political and social conditions of a lot of nations (in particular the Balkans), the different traditions and points of view, I feel more mature and wise now.

 

Not too bad, you need to check punctuation, spelling, and word order, I hope my corrections help. Let me know if you have any questions.

 

April 18, 2014
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