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Some unfortunate things happened these days
Recently, Everything has been going so terribly. My teeth have been hurting and my stomach is aching too. To top it off, I accidently deleted some mportant files from my phone! Plus, an iron fell on my computer and my laptop screen cracked. The most unfortunate thing though is that my mom called and told me that a thieve had broken into our house and stolen a necklace and all my saved cash, which really infuriated me. Thankfully the theif idn't threaten my parents safety (actually I heard he didn't even get into my parents' bedroom) and so everything will hopefully be all right, afterall money is something that can be earned again, not parents. Nothing's more important than safety!