鱼宝_Japh
Some unfortunate things happened these days Recently, I've been so unfortunate. My teeth hurt, my stomach ached. Important files were deleted by accident from my phone and can not be restored. My laptop's screen was cracked by hitting on the iron. The most unfortunate thing is I received a phone call from my mom and was told that a thieve had broken into our house and stolen all my saved cash and a necklace, which makes me feel so furious now and hate thieves more. But anyway, that ugly just stole cash and didn't threaten my parents safety, actually he didn't even get into my parents' bedroom, and everything will be all right, because money is stolen and it can be earned again but we only live once. So nothing's important compared to life safety.
Apr 18, 2014 11:19 AM
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Some unfortunate things happened these days

Recently, Everything has been going so terribly. My teeth have been hurting and my stomach is aching too. To top it off, I accidently deleted some mportant files  from my phone! Plus, an iron fell on my computer and my laptop screen cracked. The most unfortunate thing though is that my mom called and told me that a thieve had broken into our house and stolen a necklace and all my saved cash, which really infuriated me. Thankfully the theif idn't threaten my parents safety (actually I heard he didn't even get into my parents' bedroom) and so everything will hopefully be all right, afterall money is something that can be earned again, not parents. Nothing's more important than safety!

 

 

April 18, 2014
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