honest girl
Presentation Hello everybody, I learnt English language, I have obtained my diplomat since 2009. I am trying to develop my language production because nowadays the language is the main factor to communicate with other , to practice and exchange language ideas....
Apr 18, 2014 11:43 AM
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Hi! I just correct your passage, good job! I cut it down quite a bit because there were some unecessary parts and some parts that were a bit confusing.  Hope this helps! - Teacher Shahmir

 

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Hello everybody, I am learning English.   I obtained a diploma in 2009(I am confused what this sentece means). I am trying to develop my language skills because language is of course the way we communicate with others to exchange ideas.

 

 

April 18, 2014
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