Hi Lily! 你写的真不错，我很同意你的看法！！ 我把它改了一下，hope this helps! 加油加油! - Teacher Shahmir

Composition

Nowadays, there are many students who are calling for a reform of English language instruction worldwide. There are a variety of reasons why.
First, Univeristy, highschool and middle school English lessons all share one common characteristic; they're very boring. Second, college students don't just want to learn vocabulary, they want to learn how to use them as well! Third, many college students are aspiring to be English teachers themselves so they should be able to learnthe skills required in leading a successful class.
In my opinion, we should reform English education in the following ways. First, we could increase the amount of focus put on oral English in the classroom. Second, we could teach students more about translating skills. Third, teachers should leave more time to allow students to ask questions. With these ideas more students will want to study English and improve it quickly and help them with their future work.