Today Hello everyone!Today,i go a party,the mother of my friend is having a birthday,i'm very excited,I cooked a chicken an vegetables for a lunch,were a delight,my sister hates chicken,she hates met

Lígia Leal

Today Hello everyone!Today,i go a party,the mother of my friend is having a birthday,i'm very excited,I cooked a chicken an vegetables for a lunch,were a delight,my sister hates chicken,she hates mets, she likes fish! I intend to learn and improve my English, making friends and talking

Apr 19, 2014 5:58 PM

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Today

Hello everyone! Today,I'm going to a party, my friends' mother is the mother of my friend is having a birthday., I'm very excited. , I cooked a chicken and vegetables for a lunch, it was delicious were a delight, but my sister hates chicken. , She hates meats, but she likes fish!

I intend to learn and improve my English by making friends and talking.

April 19, 2014

Hi Lígia! Is this a party that you already went to (past) or that you're going to go to later today (future)? I'm going to correct it the second way (future).

Today

Hello everyone! Today, I'm going to go to a party. My friend's mother is having a birthday. I'm very excited; I cooked a chicken and vegetables for lunch. ,were a delight, They're going to be delicious! My sister hates chicken, she hates meat, but she likes fish!

I intend to learn and improve my English, making friends and talking

I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any questions!