Luis
My first lines Hi these are my first lines here in italki, I have enthusiasm to learn in the company of so great as the people of this community. Soon I'll be writing more, I hope your help to overcome my mistakes in the English language. I thank you and I have a great day in the world where they are. soon
Apr 20, 2014 8:06 PM
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My first lines

Hi, these are my first lines here in on italki. I have the  enthusiasm to learn in the company of so the great as the people of this community. Soon I'll be writing more, I hope your will help me to overcome my mistakes in the English language.

I thank you and I hope that you have a great day wherever you are in the world. where they are. I hope to write again soon.

April 20, 2014

My first lines

Hi these are my first lines here in on italki, I have enthusiasm to learn in the company of so such great as the people of in this community. Soon I'll be writing more, I hope your you help me to overcome my mistakes in the English language. <em>*Note: English is a language, so it's a bit repetive to say "language" after. :)</em>

I thank you and I hope you have a great day in the world wherever they you are. soon

 

<em>"I hope your help to overcome my mistakes in the English language."</em>

<em>Another way you could write this is: I hope your help will allow me to overcome my mistakes in English. </em>

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<em>Looking forward to more, keep it up!
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April 20, 2014
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