As we have a dog. One day I was driving to home by underground. Man entered on the stop with a dog. It was a red miracle with short legs and the very clever snout. I fell in love and decided: “If I

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As we have a dog. One day I was driving to home by underground. Man entered on the stop with a dog. It was a red miracle with short legs and the very clever snout. I fell in love and decided: “If I will have a dog, it’s will be a dachshund!”. My son growing up and we decided to get a dog. I was ready to do this is the responsible step. We read a lot of books about this breed of dogs and understood that this a dog for our family. Her name is Rikki (Riviera by ID). For 13 years she gives us joy of communication. With each member of family she has its relations. I very likes my pet.

Apr 21, 2014 8:53 AM

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As we have a dog.

How we got our dog.

One day I was driving to home by underground.

One day I was going/travelling home on the underground.

Man entered on the stop with a dog.
At one stop, a man got on with a dog.

It was a red miracle with short legs and the very clever snout.
It was a red marvel/wonder with short legs and a very clever face.

I fell in love and decided: “If I will have a dog, it’s will be a dachshund!”.
I instantly fell in love and decided, “If I am going to have a dog, it will/must be a Dachshund!”

My son growing up and we decided to get a dog.
When my son had grown up, we decided to get a dog.
OR
While my son was growing up, we decided to get a dog.

I was ready to do this is the responsible step.
I was ready to do this, but first took responsible steps.

We read a lot of books about this breed of dogs and understood that this a dog for our family.
We read a lot of books about this breed of dog, and felt/thought that it would be perfect for our family.
OR
We read a lot of books about this breed, and felt/thought that it would be the ideal dog for our family.

Her name is Rikki (Riviera by ID).
Her name is Rikki (full name Riviera)

For 13 years she gives us joy of communication.
For 13 years she has given us the joy of companionship.

With each member of family she has its relations.
With each member of the family she has a close bond/relationship.

I very likes my pet.
I love my pet.
OR
I like my pet very much.

If you have any questions at all, don't hesitate to ask!

P.S. Your dog is lovely!

April 21, 2014

How we got our dog.

One day I was driving home on the underground. A man got on at one stop with a dog. It was a red miracle with short legs and a very clever snout. I fell in love and decided: “If I have a dog, it will be a dachshund!”. My son grew up and we decided to get a dog. I was ready to do this as the responsible step. We read a lot of books about this breed of dogs and understood that this was a dog for our family. Her name is Rikki (Riviera by ID). For 13 years she has given us joy of. With each member of the family she has a special relationship. I very much like my pet.

April 21, 2014