Original text I have a friend, Her name is SRI LESTARI, but I called her “Nyak or Emak”, it means mother or mom..wkwkwkwk She is my classmate, yet at school we weren’t really close and we didn’t talk much. Time has passed, and we now know each other and we share everything about the English language. She’s the girl who introduced me to italki. She told me to make an account on italki so that I might find more native English speakers in the world. I’ve met native speaker because of her, and she is really nice to me. I don’t have too much experiences with her.
Since we have become friends we have ‘hung out’ twice. The first time was when I asked her to help me (with what??) and in return I would pay her whatever she wanted. The second was one week ago; we went to DUFAN (DUnia FANtasi or Fantasy world). We played a lot of games like (not a game but a ride??) Rollercoaster, merry go round, tornado. .and other similar rides/games (make this clear rides games or RISEDS and GAMES? Using adrenaline is good but its maybe too specific for you to use yet). One stupid but funny story from our day out occurred when we played a Kora-Kora. Kora-Kora is the big boat: the boat can shift to 90 degrees so the body was is almost standing upright. We rode that boat with people we didn’t know, yet when that boat took us up and down I looked at the people and we were all screaming (Think about this sentence can you make it more succinct?? Think about why you need to say people you don’t know are there simpler words – like stranger?) . Some people who felt scared were screaming “ahhhhh.....let me down!” or “ahhh..stop it! I can’t take this anymore” and the people who loved the game ride were screaming “ahhhh...awesome! MOREEEE......!!!” but when I looked at Sri beside me, she was laughing. She looked like a crazy and stupid girl (Bodoh is ok in Bahasa Indonesia but not in English – so instead of stupid say “silly”). In my mind (I was thinking??) “why is nyak laughing alone while everyone else is screaming?? Stupid!”. Then I asked her “NYAKKKK..how can you be laughing alone? You’re crazy!!!” But she kept laughing and told me in a betawi accent that she felt like (she was) being tickled by someone. Suddenly I became deaf girl(Fix this) ~("._.)~ ~(._.")~ Hearing HER the answer, “I don’t know why we laughed,” we couldn’t stop until we go down from boat. wkwkwkwkwkw....We played a lot of games until night.. but SRI/she never looked/got/was scared on any rides..cool, right??!! hahaha She wasn't tired until we got home..she is superb girl XD.....She is very unique (compared to??) other girl(s) in the world. I never thought that we could/would become be friend(s) like this ^^ and I hope/wish we can/stay like this forever ^^..........I wish we could have a riot story more and more later(Aneh sekali – please expand on the meaning of this last sentence)...Wkwkwkwk XD
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