I am Taiwanese and work at a semiconductor company. In other words...

I am Taiwanese and work at a semiconductor company. In other words, I am an engineer. I want to improve my English conversation and exchange my native Mandarin with italki friends. But until just now, I've only received one message. I will try more to make new friends on this web site and have a chance to start my language exchange journey with you.

I am Taiwanese and work on semiconductor company. In the other words...

I am Taiwanese and work on semiconductor company. In the other words, I am engineer. I want to improve my conversation by English and exchange my native Mandarin with italki friends. But I just get one message only until now. I would try more to make new friend on this web site and have a chance to start my language exchange journey with you.

Notes:

Combine first two sentences:

I am Taiwanese and work on semiconductor company. In the other words...

I am a Taiwanese engineer, working for a and work on semiconductor company. In the other words, I am engineer. I want to improve my conversation by English and exchange by exchanging my native Mandarin with italki friends. But I just get have received only one message only invititation to do a language exchange until now. I would will try more hard to make new friends on this web site and have a increase my chances to start my language exchange journey with you.

Notes:
Combine first two sentences:

1. Who you are and where you work should be one sentence just like Chinese.

2. You don't have to include the word conversation since improving your English can mean, reading, writing or talking.

3. "I have received 1 invitition/message " might even be similiar to how you would say this Mandarin as well.

4. You need to include what you will "try to do more" of ... I think there is a try hard/work hard expression in Mandarin, too.

5. "Increase my chance" instead of "have a chance"