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Letter You are in a room in a college which you share with another friend. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. Dear Sir, I would like to bring attention towards the issues which I am facing. I am living in shared room in the college campus which is 5A. I am facing trouble living with my room partner as his friends keep visiting on daily basis. They play loud music in the room which interrupt my studies. They even party in the room and use my things without even asking me. Most of my things are missing from my place as they never returned it. They took my laptop and when they gave it back some of the keys of the laptop were broken which costs me a lot to get it repaired. I request you to arrange a single room as soon as possible for me, so that I can easily prepare for exams and save my rest of the things. I need a separate room as I don’t want any disturbance in my private life which is getting impact in this shared room. Yours Sincerely XYZ
Apr 23, 2014 6:18 PM
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You are in a room in a college which you share with another friend. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.


Dear Sir,
I would like to bring attention towards the issues which I am facing. I am living inshared room 5A on the college campus. I am facing trouble living with my room partner as his friends keep visiting on a daily basis. They play loud music in the room which interrupts my studies. They even party in the room and use my things without even asking me.
Most of my things are missing from my place as they never return them. They took my laptop and when they gave it back some of the keys of the laptop were broken which costs me a lot to get it repaired.
I request you arrange a single room as soon as possible for me, so that I can easily prepare for exams and save the rest of my things. I need a separate room as I don’t want any disturbance in my private life which is currently getting impacted in this shared room.
Yours Sincerely
XYZ

 

 

Good letter! I only noticed small changes. Ask me if you would like clarification on anything.

April 23, 2014
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