好吃！ ／／ 二零一四年四月三十四号
大家好！今天天气不太好，寒冷多云(“多云”可代表阴天)。
首先，我在咖啡店喝了一杯咖啡，还吃了一个肉桂小面包。然后，我去了一家马来西亚菜馆。他们的菜太好吃(“好吃”可以用美味)了！我吃了一碗马来西亚咖喱和米饭。这个菜馆离我家不远，我希望有更多的钱！
现在，我在大学图书馆。我正在练习汉语，可是我还想学习苏格兰盖尔语。我不会说盖尔语但是我会说英语，法语，意大利语和一些汉语。也许我会说太多的外语？哈哈
今年夏天我可能去巴黎或者柏林。当然，我最想要去中国！
还没回去之前，请问：你想要去在哪儿？
(English translation: Hey everybody! Today's weather wasn't good, it was very cold and cloudy.
First, at the cafe, I drank a cup of coffee and also ate a cinnamon bun. After that, I went to a Malaysian restaurant. Their food is too delicious! I ate a bowl of Malaysian curry and boiled rice. This restaurant is very close to my home, I wish I had more money!
Now, I'm at the university library. I'm practising my Chinese but I would like to be studying Scottish Gaelic. I can't speak Gaelic but I can speak English, French, Italian and a little Chinese. Maybe I am able to speak too many languages? haha
This summer I might go to Paris or Berlin. I want to go to China the most, of course!
Before I go, a question for you: Where would you like to go?)
这张照片是咖啡在Peter‘s Yard，爱丁堡。／ This picture is of coffee at Peter's Yard, Edinburgh.
好吃！ ／／ 二零一四年四月二十四号
大家好！今天天气不好，又冷又阴天。
首先，在咖啡店我喝了一杯咖啡。还吃了一个肉桂小面包。然后，我去了马来西亚菜馆。他们的菜太好吃了！我吃了一碗马来西亚咖喱和米饭。这个菜馆离我家不远，我希望有更多的钱！
现在，我在大学图书馆。我练习汉语可是我也想要学习苏格兰盖尔语。我不会说盖尔语但是我会说英语，法语，意大利语，一点儿汉语。也许我会说太多的外语？哈哈。
今年夏天我可能去巴黎或者柏林。当然，我最想要去中国！
还没回去之前，请问：你想要去哪儿？
(English translation: Hey everybody! Today's weather wasn't good, it was very cold and cloudy.
First, at the cafe, I drank a cup of coffee and also ate a cinnamon bun. After that, I went to a Malaysian restaurant. Their food is too delicious! I ate a bowl of Malaysian curry and boiled rice. This restaurant is very close to my home, I wish I had more money!
Now, I'm at the university library. I'm practising my Chinese but I would like to be studying Scottish Gaelic. I can't speak Gaelic but I can speak English, French, Italian and a little Chinese. Maybe I am able to speak too many languages? haha
This summer I might go to Paris or Berlin. I want to go to China the most, of course!
Before I go, a question for you: Where would you like to go?)
这张照片是咖啡在Peter‘s Yard，爱丁堡。／ This picture is of coffee at Peter's Yard, Edinburgh.
好吃！ ／／ 二零一四年四月三十四号
大家好！今天天气不好，很冷和阴天。
先，在咖啡店我喝了一杯咖啡。还有，吃了一个肉桂小面包。然后，我去了马来西亚菜馆。他们的菜太好吃了！我吃了一碗马来西亚咖喱和米饭。这个菜馆离我家不远，我希望有更多的钱！
现在，我在大学图书馆。我练习汉语可是我想要学习苏格兰盖尔语。我不会说盖尔语但是我会说英语，法语，意大利语，一点儿汉语。也许我会说太多的外语？哈哈
今年夏天我可能去巴黎或者柏林。我最想要去中国，当然！
还没回去之前，请问：你想要去在哪儿？
Translating...
(English translation: Hey everybody!
Today's weather wasn't good, it was very cold and cloudy. 今天天气差, 云鋪滿天, 非常冷
First, at the cafe, I drank a cup of coffee and also ate a cinnamon bun. 首先我在间咖非店吃了一杯咖啡, 也吃了一香桂小面包. 肉桂 sounds so horrible!
After that, I went to a Malaysian restaurant. 然后到一家马来西亚餐厅.
Their food is too delicious! 他们的菜色良好有味
I ate a bowl of Malaysian curry and boiled rice. 吃了一碗马来西咖喱和一碗白飯.
This restaurant is very close to my home, I wish I had more money! 餐厅靠近我家, 只是希望有多些錢来多吃
Now, I'm at the university library. 現在在大学图书馆裡.
I'm practising my Chinese but I would like to be studying Scottish Gaelic. 在学习中文, 不过也喜欢能学苏格兰盖尔语.
I can't speak Gaelic but I can speak English, French, Italian and a little Chinese. 虽不能說, 不过会說英, 法, 意 文和一些中文.
Maybe I am able to speak too many languages? haha 恐是我能說得太多言語嗎? 哈哈
This summer I might go to Paris or Berlin. I want to go to China the most, of course!
此夏期我会去巴黎或柏林. 我最想要去的地方, 当然还是中国!
Before I go, a question for you: Where would you like to go?)
我还沒走之前, 想請问问你一下, 你有什么地方你想要去嗎?
You have a good correction already. Here's another version so that you can improve :) Correcting from your Chinese without looking at your original.
好吃！ ／／ 二零一四年四月三十四号
大家好！今天天气不良好，又阴又很冷和阴天。
首先，我在咖啡店我喝了一杯咖啡, 也还有，吃了一个块肉桂小面包。然后，到一间我去了马来西亚菜馆。他们的菜味太好吃了！我吃了一碗马来西亚咖喱和米饭。这个菜馆地方近离我家不远，只是钱袋不丰滿, 不能每天去吃我希望有更多的钱！
现在，虽然我在大学图书馆。我裡练学习汉语中文, 可是我也想要学习苏格兰盖尔语。我不会说盖尔语但是我会说英语，法语，意大利语，和一点点中文儿汉语。也许我会说太多不同的外语啊! 哈哈
今年夏天我可能会去巴黎或者去柏林。我最想要的, 是去中国，当然！
还没回去之前，请问：你想要去在哪儿別的地方嗎？
(English translation: Hey everybody! Today's weather wasn't good, it was very cold and cloudy.
First, at the cafe, I drank a cup of coffee and also ate a cinnamon bun. After that, I went to a Malaysian restaurant. Their food is too delicious! I ate a bowl of Malaysian curry and boiled rice. This restaurant is very close to my home, I wish I had more money!
Now, I'm at the university library. I'm practising my Chinese but I would like to be studying Scottish Gaelic. I can't speak Gaelic but I can speak English, French, Italian and a little Chinese. Maybe I am able to speak too many languages? haha
This summer I might go to Paris or Berlin. I want to go to China the most, of course!
Before I go, a question for you: Where would you like to go?)
这张照片是咖啡在Peter‘s Yard，爱丁堡。／ This picture is of coffee at Peter's Yard, Edinburgh.
好吃！ ／／ 二零一四年四月三十四号
大家好！今天天气不好，很冷，和阴天。
我首先在咖啡店我喝了一杯咖啡，。还有，吃了一个肉桂小面包。然后，我又去了马来西亚菜馆。他们的菜太好吃了！我吃了一碗马来西亚咖喱和米饭。这个菜馆离我家不远，我希望有更多的钱！
现在，我在大学图书馆。我练习汉语可是我还想要学习苏格兰盖尔语。我不会说盖尔语但是我会说英语，法语，意大利语，一点儿汉语。也许我会说太多的外语？哈哈
今年夏天我可能去巴黎或者柏林。我最想要去中国，当然！ 当然，我最想去的还是中国！
还没回去之前，请问：你想要去在哪儿？
(English translation: Hey everybody! Today's weather wasn't good, it was very cold and cloudy.
First, at the cafe, I drank a cup of coffee and also ate a cinnamon bun. After that, I went to a Malaysian restaurant. Their food is too delicious! I ate a bowl of Malaysian curry and boiled rice. This restaurant is very close to my home, I wish I had more money!
Now, I'm at the university library. I'm practising my Chinese but I would like to be studying Scottish Gaelic. I can't speak Gaelic but I can speak English, French, Italian and a little Chinese. Maybe I am able to speak too many languages? haha
This summer I might go to Paris or Berlin. I want to go to China the most, of course!
Before I go, a question for you: Where would you like to go?)
这张照片是咖啡在Peter‘s Yard，爱丁堡。／ This picture is of coffee at Peter's Yard, Edinburgh.
