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April 23,2014 Last week,I saw 2 second-screen movies: Dallas Buyer Club and Only God Forgives. I saw "Only God Forgives" for Ryan Gosling because I really like him. Fortunately, it was very hard for me to understand what the movie tried to express. Many questions were full of my mind.... "Dallas Buyer Club" was an awesome movie. I enjoyed it a lot. Jared Leto is an amazing actor. He performed so well in this movie. I was touched about his acting in this movie. Highly recommend for everyone. I met my partner yesterday in a cafe. We stared late so I was worrying about I would miss the last bus.Therefore,I couldn't focus on what we were talking about. That sucked...I wasted the time to practice English. Also,I did really miss the last bus so I had to take a train back home, It was midnight when I arrive at home. This reminded me that I should control the time well next time.
Apr 24, 2014 3:54 AM
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April 23,2014

 

Last week, I saw 2 second-screen movies: Dallas Buyers Club and Only God Forgives.
I watched "Only God Forgives" for Ryan Gosling because I really like him.
Unfortunately, it was very hard for me to understand what the movie tried to express.
Many questions were full in my mind....

 

"Dallas Buyers Club" was an awesome movie.
I enjoyed it a lot. Jared Leto is an amazing actor. He performed so well in this movie.
I was touched about his acting and would highly recommend the movie to everyone.

I met my partner yesterday in a café. We started late so I was worried about missing the last bus and therefore I couldn't focus on what we were talking about.

 

That sucked...I wasted the time to practice English.
Also, I really did miss the last bus so I had to take a train home.
It was midnight when I arrived and this reminded me that I should manage my time better next time.

 

Or:

 

I saw 2 second-screen movies last week. They were Dallas Buyers Club and Only God Forgives.
I watched "Only God Forgives" for Ryan Gosling because I really like him. Unfortunately it was very hard for me to understand what the movie was trying to express because there were so many questions in my mind.

 

"Dallas Buyers Club" was an awesome movie. Jared Leto’s performance as a supporting actor was amazing. I was touched by it and would highly recommend this movie to anyone.

 

Yesterday I met my language partner in a café. We started late and I was worried about missing the last bus so had difficulty focussing on our conversation.

 

That sucked because I wasted an opportunity to practice English. And then it turned out that I did miss the bus anyway so I had to take the train instead. I arrived home at midnight which served to remind me that I need to manage my time better in future

 

 


I have provided a couple of modifications for you. I hope they help in some way. I wasn’t sure who the partner was that you met in the café and have guessed them to be a language partner. This is because you mentioned practicing English in the next paragraph.

April 24, 2014
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