Marina
Australia or China Hi everyone! I am in the edge to decide what way choose. Last monday I resigned my job because the life that I was living was too boring, I was getting depresed and I needed a change in my life. I think I took a very important decision beause right now the work situation is not good and many people in my country are unemployee, but I think that I shouldn´t be afraid about it, I need to be confident in my self because I am a qualified person and also I speak languajes which I think, Is the most important point. I contacted with an agency that helps you to move to another country and they offered to me to possible destinations: Australia or China. I got confused because I speak chinese so moving to china could be very interesting because I will make progress in my mandarin skills. However, on a second thought, i went in Singapore last year, I already know how is Asia. Maybe I should have a try in Australia.
Apr 24, 2014 4:43 PM
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Australia or China?

Hi everyone! I am in the edge to decide what way choose. I am confused in choosing to live in Australia or China. Last Monday, I resigned from my job because the life that I was living was getting too boring. I was getting depressed and I needed a change in my life. I think I took a very important decision because right now the work situation is not good and many people in my country are unemployeed, but I think that I shouldn't be afraid about it. I need to be confident in myself because I am a qualified person and also I speak languajes who speaks many languages which I think is very Is the most important point. I contacted with an agency that helps you to move to another country and they offered to me two possible destinations: Australia or China. I got feel confused because I can speak Chinese so moving to China could be very interesting because I will make progress in my Mandarin skills. However, on a second thought the other hand, as I went in to Singapore last year, I already know how is Asia is. Maybe I should have a try in go with Australia.

 

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Hope you make the right decision Marina! :)

April 24, 2014
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Australia or China

Hi everyone! I am in the edge middle to decide what way to choose. Last monday I resigned my job because the life that I was living was too very boring. I was getting depressed and  wanted a change in my life. I think, I took a very important decision because right now the work situation is not great and many people in my country are unemployed. But I think that I shouldn´t be afraid of it. I need to be confident in my self as I am a qualified person and also I who speak multiple languages which I think, is an most important point. I contacted with an agency that will help me to move in another country and they offered to me to two possible destinations: Australia or China. I got confused because I can speak chinese so moving to China could be very interesting as I will make progress in my mandarin skills. However, on a second thought, I went to Singapore last year, I already know how is Asia. Maybe I should have a go with Australia.

 

Good luck Marina

April 24, 2014
Don't forget: names of countries, languages, names of days must be capitalised (written with capital letters) and you go TO a country not IN. :)
April 24, 2014

Australia or China

Hi everyone! I cannot decide which to choose. Last monday I resigned from my job because the life that I was living was too boring, I was getting depresed and I needed a change in life. I think I made a very important decision beause right now the work situation is not good and many people in my country are unemployed, but I think that I shouldn´t be afraid of it, I need to be confident in myself because I am a qualified person and also I speak languages which I think is the most important point. I contacted an agency that helps you to move to another country and they offered to me two possible destinations: Australia or China. I got confused because I speak chinese so moving to china could be very interesting because I will make progress in my mandarin skills. However, on a second thought, i went in Singapore last year, I already know how Asia is. Maybe I should have a try in Australia.

April 24, 2014
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