Kelsey
Hope someone can correct my grammatical mistakes~thanks~ Digital media becomes more popular in peoples daily life which can offer abundant information improving the perceive to the world. While others are the vindicator of print media which they believe that will be more beneficial to the ability of imagination and language skill. Personally, both of them develop the learning skill in diferent way.
Apr 25, 2014 12:40 AM
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Hope someone can correct my grammatical mistakes~thanks~

 

Digital media has become more popular in people’s daily lives and this can offer abundant information in improving the way we perceive the world. While others are the vindicators of print media which they believe will be more beneficial to the ability of imagination and language skills. Personally, both of them develop learning skill in different way.

 

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Digital media has become more popular in people’s daily lives and offers an abundance of information which improves our perception of the world. Others vindicate (for) print media which they believe more beneficial towards the development of our imagination and language. I personally believe that they both provide learning skills; only that they do so in different ways.

 

 

 

I’m not sure myself of how correct the use of the word “for” is which is why I have put it in brackets. The first example I have provided tries to use you original words. The second is provided so you can see some comparisons and hopefully have some fun. I hope this helps. You write well. 

 

April 25, 2014
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