Sunny
Flying Wind An empty street Twinkling stars scatter in the night sky Warm breeze blows over my face Shadow of trees stands still in the silence Slight fragrance floats through the air Peacefulness sits a while with me Flying wind, please tell me where you go I'd like to walk with you Flying wind Please raise me up, So I can stand on the mountains Flying wind Please raise me up, to walk on stormy sea Flying wind Please raise me up, to more than I can be
Apr 25, 2014 2:05 AM
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My suggestion.  Long time haven't seen you around.


Flying Sweeping Wind

 

An empty street 
Twinkling stars scattering in the night sky
Warm breeze blowing over my face
Shadowy of trees standing still in the silence
Slight fragrance floats wafting through the air
Peacefulness Please, Serenity sit here for a while with me

Flying O ye sweeping wind, please pray tell me where you are heading to go
I'd like to walk with you

Flying O ye sweeping wind
Please raise carry me up,
So I can may stand on the mountain tops

O ye Flying sweeping wind
Please raise lift me up on the waves,
So I may to walk upon the stormy sea

Flying windof success,
Please raise advance me up,
to more greater heights than that I can possibly be

 

Good imagery.  Don't feel bashful to ask for the reasons I suggested.

April 25, 2014
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