Describe an old object that your family has kept My family has kept a bracelet for several generations. This bracelet is made of silver and there are dragon and phoenix patterns on it. I assume my

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Describe an old object that your family has kept My family has kept a bracelet for several generations. This bracelet is made of silver and there are dragon and phoenix patterns on it. I assume my family has kept this special bracelet for at least 200 years. My grandmother received this gift from her grandmother and gave it to my mother on my mother's wedding day. Finally, my mother gave it to me on my wedding day. This bracelet is rather special for my family and me. It has become a part of my family. I think it contains mother's love. I can still vividly remember the occasion when my mother gave it to me. My mother just said some simple words - you should take of yourself and get along well with your husband, but I could see tears in my mother's eyes. She loves me so much that at that moment, she might have the feeling that she would lose her lovely daughter. I will keep this bracelet intact, send it to my daughter on her wedding day and tell her the story about it. This special gift will be handed down generation and generation.

Apr 25, 2014 2:56 AM

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Describe an old object that your family has kept

My family has kept a bracelet for several generations. This bracelet is made of silver and there are dragon and phoenix patterns on it.
I believe that my family has kept this special bracelet for at least 200 years. My grandmother received this gift from her grandmother and gave it to my mother on my mother's wedding day. Finally, my mother gave it to me on my wedding day.
This bracelet is rather special for my family and me. It has become a part of my family. I think it contains mother's love. I can still vividly remember the occasion when my mother gave it to me. My mother just said some simple words - you should take it for yourself and get along well with your husband, but I could see tears in my mother's eyes. She loves me so much and at that moment she might have the feeling that she would lose her lovely daughter.
I will keep this bracelet intact, send it to my daughter on her wedding day and tell her the story about it. This special gift will be handed down generation and generation.

April 25, 2014

Describe an old object that your family has kept

My family has kept a bracelet for several generations. This bracelet is made of silver and there are is a [為什么呢]dragon and phoenix patterns on it.

I assume my family has kept this special bracelet for at least 200 years. My grandmother received this as a gift from her grandmother and who in turn gave it to my mother on my mother's her wedding day. Finally, my mother gave it to me on mine my wedding day.

This bracelet is rather special for to my family and me. It has become is a part of my family for three generations. I think it contains mother's It has the love mothers. I can still vividly remember the occasion when my mother gave [你已經跟我们說過] it was given to me. My mother Mom [親切些, 而且這句用了太多, 所以听起耒, 非常壓闷] just said some told me these simple words - you should "take of yourself and get along well with your hubby" [語气温柔些] husband, but I could see tears in my mother's welling in her eyes. [想要哭但哭不出来] She loves me so much that [這样太直接, 不雅因為此小作是描寫人与人之间的感情] At that moment, I knew how much I meant to her and she was afraid that she might have the feeling that she was going to would [為什么用过去繼續詞呢]lose her lovely [自誇, 不好]daughter.

I will keep this bracelet safely for my intact, send it to for my daughter's on her wedding day and tell her the story about behind it. This special gift will be handed down from generation and generation; from mother to daughter and forever more. [給作文些詩情]