The Internet-2 Equally importantly, through the Internet, people can just click the mouse to obtain any information they want in few seconds. In the earlier times, the only method to obtain informatio

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The Internet-2 Equally importantly, through the Internet, people can just click the mouse to obtain any information they want in few seconds. In the earlier times, the only method to obtain information is to go to library to search books manually. Now, however, people can just sit in front of computer and click the mouse to require latest information via search engine. Admittedly, there do still exist some concerns like personal data exposure and abused information such as violence pictures and pornography on internet. Nevertheless, I still argue that the Internet make information flow around the world instead of getting information from library books and local media, and I believe this is definitely a positive influence on modern society. In conclusion, I restate my point of view that the positive impact of the Internet override the negative side because it facilitate communication and information flow to contribute dramatic change for people’ lives.

Apr 25, 2014 5:04 PM

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The Internet-2

Equally important[], through the Internet, people can just click the mouse to obtain any information they want in few seconds. In the [past], the only method to obtain information is to go to library [and] to [manually] search [through] books. Now, however, people can just sit in front of [a] computer and click the mouse to [ac]quire [the] latest information via search engine[s]. Admittedly, there exist[s] some concerns like personal data exposure and [explicit] information such as violen[t] pictures and pornography on internet. Nevertheless, I still argue that the Internet make[s] information flow around the world instead of getting information from library books and local media, and I believe this is definitely a positive influence on modern society.

In conclusion, I restate my point of view that the positive impact of the Internet [outweighs] the negative [] because it facilitate[s] communication and information flow to contribute [towards] dramatic change for people’ lives.

July 28, 2015

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