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Could you help me correct this sentence?^^ Produce is different from create, as product is different from creature. 我想表达的意思是:制造不同于创作,正如产品不同于生物。 THANK YOU
Apr 26, 2014 12:56 PM
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Could you help me correct this sentence?^^

Produce is different from create, as product is different from creature.
我想表达的意思是:制造不同于创作,正如产品不同于生物。

THANK YOU

 

"Production is different from creation, just as a product is different from a life form"

但可以更好听一些:

"Production is not creation, just as a product is not a life form"

August 21, 2014
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Production is different from creation, as products are different from creatures.

Or if you'd rather use the verbs as you already did, then use the infinitives instead:

Producing is different from creating, as products are different from creatures. 

I prefer the first one though. I also changed product/creature to their plural forms because it just sounds better in my opinion.
Otherwise it would have been more accurate to use a product/a creature (someone correct me if I'm wrong on this).

 

April 26, 2014
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