新买的鞋
我最近刚买了的一双鞋子, 那双鞋牌子是耐克。
颜色/非常/很/是好好看啊。是用黑色和蓝色為/配色/合璧/的组合。我在网上买得了真的便宜的。还有赠品啊!的。
我得到了一张十巴仙百分之(10%)折扣票。or 打九折
我可以下一次再买, 可用这个折票。
可是，我有几个些担心。（还是忧虑？？？Both are fine）。
在网上买东西，不知这双鞋得牌子是否真假 [If it's too cheap, most probably it is]真版或不真版我没办法知道了。
而且在网站上，没说这双鞋是从那儿出什么地方生产的[出产 = manufacture from, 生产 = naturally grown products]。（或者，也许我应该说“哪里制造的”？Yes, it is better）
我也不可以摸摸一下校验查质/料量。
但我会一直从这个网站买东西, 是因为了它是更有方便的着想!
I recently bought a new pair of shoes.
The shoes' brand is Nike.
The colour is great. A combination of black and blue.
I bought it really cheap online. They also gave me a free gift.
I got a 10% discount ticket.
I can use this ticket next time I purchase something.
But I've got a few concern.
If I buy stuff from the internet, there is no way for me to know whether it is genuine or counterfeit.
And they did not mention anything in the website about where they produce their products.
I also can't touch it to check for the quality.
However, I will always buy from this website because it is more convenient that way!
新买的鞋
我最近刚买的了一双鞋。
那双鞋牌子是耐克的。
颜色好好看啊。黑色和蓝色的组合（or u can say 搭配）。
我在网上买了真的便宜的。
我在网上买的，真的很便宜, 还有赠品的。
我得到了一张十百分之(10%) 九折的折扣票。
10 percent off: 九折, 20 percent off: 八折, 15 percent off: 八五折
我可以下一次买鞋的时候用这个票。
可是，我有几个担心。（还是忧虑？？？）。 我有一点担心。
在网上买东西，这双鞋得牌子真版或不真版我没办法知道了。 我无法知道这双鞋是真品还是赝品。
而且在网站上，没说这双鞋什么地方生产的。（或者，也许我应该说“哪里制造的”？）They are both right.
我也不摸摸 无法亲手摸下鞋子校验质量。
但我会一直从这个网站买东西。
因为它更方便的。
I recently bought a new pair of shoes.
The shoes' brand is Nike.
The colour is great. A combination of black and blue.
I bought it really cheap online. They also gave me a free gift.
I got a 10% discount ticket.
I can use this ticket next time I purchase something.
But I've got a few concern.
If I buy stuff from the internet, there is no way for me to know whether it is genuine or counterfeit.
And they did not mention anything in the website about where they produce their products.
I also can't touch it to check for the quality.
However, I will always buy from this website because it is more convenient that way!
新买的鞋
我最近刚买的了一双鞋。
那双鞋的牌子是耐克。
颜色是好好看啊。黑色和蓝色的组合。，非常好看。
我在网上买了真的便宜的。还有赠品的。 我在网上买的价格非常便宜，还送了我赠品。
我得到了一张十百分之百分之十的(10%)折扣票。
我可以下一次买,用这个票。我下一次可以用这个折扣票买。
可是，我有几个点担心。（还是忧虑？？？）。还可以说：可是我有一些担心
在网上买东西，这双鞋得牌子真版或不真版的牌子是不是正版我就没办法知道了。
而且在网站上，也没说这双鞋是在什么地方生产的。（或者，也许我应该说“哪里制造的”？可以，但是注意添加“是在”）
我也不能摸摸这双鞋以校验质量。
但我会一直从这个网站买东西。
因为它是更方便的!
I recently bought a new pair of shoes.
The shoes' brand is Nike.
The colour is great. A combination of black and blue.
I bought it really cheap online. They also gave me a free gift.
I got a 10% discount ticket.
I can use this ticket next time I purchase something.
But I've got a few concern.
If I buy stuff from the internet, there is no way for me to know whether it is genuine or counterfeit.
And they did not mention anything in the website about where they produce their products.
I also can't touch it to check for the quality.
However, I will always buy from this website because it is more convenient that way!
新买的鞋
我最近刚买的了一双鞋。
那双鞋牌子是耐克。
颜色是好好看啊。黑色和蓝色的组合搭配。
我在网上买了的真的很便宜的。还有赠品的呢。
我得到了还送了我一张十百分之(10%)折扣票。
我可以下一次用这个票买东西。
可是，我有几个担心。（担心用的非常的恰当）。
在网上买东西，这双鞋是真版或不真版我没办法知道了。我不知道这双鞋是真的还是假的。
而且在网站，没说这双鞋什么地方生产的。（或者，也许我应该说“哪里制造的”？我觉得你说的很口语，我觉得很顺口，生产就很好）
我也不摸摸校验质量。 我也不能摸摸鞋子来确定质量好不好。
但我会一直会从这个网站买东西。
因为它真的很方便!
I recently bought a new pair of shoes.
The shoes' brand is Nike.
The colour is great. A combination of black and blue.
I bought it really cheap online. They also gave me a free gift.
I got a 10% discount ticket.
I can use this ticket next time I purchase something.
But I've got a few concern.
If I buy stuff from the internet, there is no way for me to know whether it is genuine or counterfeit.
And they did not mention anything in the website about where they produce their products.
I also can't touch it to check for the quality.
However, I will always buy from this website because it is more convenient that way!
其实没有什么大问题，感觉你周围有中国人，你说的很口语化，不像有人写出来的太书面了。加油
我的新鞋
我最近刚买了一双耐克鞋，
颜色很好看，是黑色和蓝色的组合的。
在网上买的真的便宜，还有赠品。
我得到了一张九折扣票。
我可以下一次买,用这个票。
可是，我有几点担心的地方。（还是忧虑？？？）
在网上买东西，这双鞋的牌子是不是正品我没办法知道。
而且在网站上，没说这双鞋是什么地方生产的。（也许我应该说“哪里制造的”？）
我也不清楚校验质量。
但我会一直从这个网站买东西的。
因为它跟方便!
I recently bought a new pair of shoes.
The shoes' brand is Nike.
The colour is great. A combination of black and blue.
I bought it really cheap online. They also gave me a free gift.
I got a 10% discount ticket.
I can use this ticket next time I purchase something.
But I've got a few concern.
If I buy stuff from the internet, there is no way for me to know whether it is genuine or counterfeit.
And they did not mention anything in the website about where they produce their products.
I also can't touch it to check for the quality.
However, I will always buy from this website because it is more convenient that way!
