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the book ( Please correct my English!) These days, I am reading a book called "Howard's gift. It is written by a professors in Harvard university. Howard who had heart attack, miraculously woke up from that illness. Then his disciple got shocked that Howard didn't regret his life. I read that book because my friend recommended to me. She said she drew the like whenever she read. The auther said that, the life gives us the gift in the name of turning point. Depends on how you use your turning point, you will live life without regret or not. It made me think of my turning point that I already experienced and also my current life. I read half of the book and I can't stop reading it. I would like to recommend the book to others as well.
May 20, 2014 10:49 AM
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The Book ( Please correct my English!)

These days, I am reading a book called "Howard's Gift. It is written by a Professors in at Harvard University. Howard who had suffered a heart attack, miraculously came to life again woke up from that illness. Then his disciple friends were got shocked that Howard didn't regret his past life.

I read that this book because my friend recommended it to me. She said she drew the like learnt from it whenever she read it . ( I am presuming that your friend read this book more than once)

The author said that, the life gives us the a gift in the name form of a turning point. It depends on how you use your turning point, as to whether or not  you will live your  life without regret or not. It made me think of my past turning point that I already experienced and also my current life.

I have read half of the book /I am halfway through and I can't stop reading it/ put it down. I would like to recommend the book to others as well.

May 20, 2014
These days=Recently English grammar is from "conclusion".so put this word at last. It is written by a professors in Harvard university=A professor wrote this one in Harvard university. English hates putting on the same word many times,so you should express"one".
September 8, 2014

the book ( Please correct my English!)

These days, I am reading a book called "Howard's gift." It is written by a professor at Harvard University. Howard, who had heart attack, miraculously woke up from his illness. His disciple was shocked that Howard didn't regret his life.

I read that book because my friend recommended to me. She said she drew the like whenever she read. (I'm not quite sure what point you're trying to make in this last sentance)

The auther said that, the life gives us the gift in the name of turning point. Depending on how you use your turning point, you will live life with or without regret. It made me think of my turning point that I already experienced and also my current life.

I read half of the book and I can't stop reading it. I would like to recommend the book to others as well.

 

Not bad :) keep practicing! 

July 25, 2014
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