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New house !

I move tomorow! I am too happy! My new house is so beautiful, and, now I've got a garden ! Realy, tomorow will be a great day ! Holidays, new house, senior year, and, again holidays, oh my god, I'm so happy! :)

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    New house !

    I move tomorowtomorrow! I am too happy! My new house is so beautiful, and,(you only need one comma before and (,and)). now I've got a garden ! Realy Really, tomorow will be a great day ! Holidays, new house, senior year, and,(same thing here) again holidays, oh my god, I'm so happy! :)

     

    New house !

    I move tomorowtomorrow! I am too happy! My new house is so beautiful, and, now I've got a garden ! Realy, tomorowtomorrow will be a great day ! Holidays, new house, senior year, and, again holidays, oh my god, I'm so happy! :)

     

    New house !

    I move tomorow! I am too so happy! My new house is so beautiful and now I've got a garden! Realy, Tomorrow will really be a great day ! Holidays, new house, senior year and again holidays, oh my god, I'm so happy! :)

     

    I'm glad for you! :)

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