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On returning home from my holidays . Could anybody check it ? Thank you Dear Mr. Brown My name is Sara Grises I am writing to comunicate that I lost a jumper in your hotel, while I stayed in with my husband and my son for 5 days ( from monday to Friday) I am not aware of the loss until we arrived at home. When I had unpacked my suitcase I realized that my favourite jumper has dissapeared. This jumper is very important for me, because is a father's present . he bought me when I graduated. According to the jumper, is a beautiful large tight red jumper with a zipper on the back. I would like to help you attach a personal photo who I wear the jumper. Although I don't remmenber where I lost the jumper, It's possible that the jumper might have left over the bed in our room. If you found my jumper , you would communicate with me by e-mail or calling my telephone as soon as you want. Finally I am very grateful with your service and I' ll recommend your accomodation. We passed a wonderful relaxing holidays in England I am forward to received your answer. Yours sincerely
May 29, 2014 5:20 PM
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On returning home from my holidays . Could anybody correct it ? Thank you


Dear Mr. Brown

My name is Sara Grises I am writing to comunicate let you know that I lost a jumper in your hotel, while I stayed there with my husband and my son for 5 days ( from Monday to Friday). Please be on the look out for it, it was very special to me.

I was not aware of the loss until we arrived at home. When I had unpacked my suitcase I realized that my favourite jumper had dissapeared. This jumper is very important for me, because is a father's present from my father. He bought for me when I graduated.

According to The jumper, is a beautiful large tight red jumper with a zipper on the back. I would like to help you have attached a personal photo who I of myself wearing the jumper.

Although I don't remmenber where I lost it, the jumper, it's possible that the jumper might have been left over the bed in our room. If you find my jumper, you would you please let me know as soon as you are able communicate with me by e-mail or calling by telephone as soon as you want.

Finally I was very happy and satisfied with your service and I will recommend your accomodation. We had a wonderful relaxing holidays in England.

I look forward to received your reply.

Yours sincerely

 

Nice job.

May 29, 2014
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