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夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高是几乎100华氏度,等于几乎38摄氏度。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,每天从11:15到15:30他们去我们家附近的私立高学。我的女儿先上一门跳水课,我大儿子先上一门木工课。然后,他们一起去参加运动camp一整下午。他们会晒黑了!夏天是我最讨厌的季节,我很怕热!

Summer has begun! The temperatures this week are really very high, almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (equivalent to almost 38 degrees Celcius). My children have begun a summer camp. Every day from 11:15 to 3:30, they go to a private high school near our house. My daughter first goes to a diving class; my older son's first class is woodworking. Then they go together to a sports camp for the whole afternoon. They will be so tanned! Summer is my least favorite season. I really can't stand the heat!

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    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,最高温度经常达到几乎100华氏度,等于几乎38摄氏度。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,他们每天11:15去我们家附近的私立高学,15:30回来。我的女儿先上一门跳水课,我大儿子先上一门木工课。然后,他们一起去参加一下午运动夏令营。他们一定会晒黑!夏天是我最讨厌的季节,我很怕热!

    Summer has begun! The temperatures this week are really very high, almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (equivalent to almost 38 degrees Celcius). My children have begun a summer camp. Every day from 11:15 to 3:30, they go to a private high school near our house. My daughter first goes to a diving class; my older son's first class is woodworking. Then they go together to a sports camp for the whole afternoon. They will be so tanned! Summer is my least favorite season. I really can't stand the heat!

    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高几乎可以达到100华氏度,等于几乎38摄氏度。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,每天从11:15到15:30他们去我们家附近的私立高。我的女儿上一门跳水课,我大儿子上一门木工课。然后,他们一起去参加一下午的运动camp一整下午。他们晒黑了!夏天是我最讨厌的季节,我很怕热!

    Summer has begun! The temperatures this week are really very high, almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (equivalent to almost 38 degrees Celcius). My children have begun a summer camp. Every day from 11:15 to 3:30, they go to a private high school near our house. My daughter first goes to a diving class; my older son's first class is woodworking. Then they go together to a sports camp for the whole afternoon. They will be so tanned! Summer is my least favorite season. I really can't stand the heat!

    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高是几乎100华氏度,(等于几乎38摄氏度)。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,每天从11:15到15:30他们去我们家附近的私立高学(私立高中,这是大陆的说法)。我的女儿先上一门跳水课,我大儿子先上一门木工课。然后,他们一起去参加运动camp一整下午,一整个下午都在那里。他们会晒黑!夏天是我最讨厌的季节,我很怕热!

    总的来讲:读不通的地方很少,很棒! 但是有些地方sounds like a robot, 所以下面是一个更加自然的版本

     

    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高温度几乎都在100华氏度(相当于38摄氏度)。我的孩子们的夏令营开始了,每天从11:15到15:30,他们都回去我们家附近的私立高中。我女儿先去上跳水课,我大儿子先去上木工课,然后,他们一起去一个运动camp,并且一整个下午都待在那里。他们这样会晒黑的!我最讨厌夏天了,太热啦!

    写的挺好的,总体没有太大的问题。

    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高是几乎100华氏度,等于几乎38摄氏度。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,每天从11:15到15:30他们去我们家附近的私立高学。我的女儿先上一门跳水课,我大儿子先上一门木工课。然后他们整个下午一起去参加运动camp一整下午。他们会晒黑!夏天是我最讨厌的季节,我很怕热!


    夏天开始了

    夏天已经开始了!这个星期的温度真是非常高,每天最高是几乎100华氏度,等于 几乎38摄氏度。我的孩子们开始了夏令营,每天从他们从早上1115 到 下午三点半上15: 30他们我们家附近的私立高学。我的女儿先上一门跳水课,大儿子先上一门木工课。然后整个下午,他们一起去参加运动camp整下午。他们会晒黑了![better to use 变成黑炭了.  I would prefer to say 变成黑鬼子了 but then again...]夏天是我最不喜欢讨厌的季节,我很Technically, "I can't stand the heat" is translated as "我受不了躁热" Humidity is 潮 /濕/气.  This is what I can't stand, so only Calif for me.

    Summer has begun! The temperatures this week are really very high, almost 100 degrees Fahrenheit (equivalent to almost 38 degrees Celcius). My children have begun a summer camp. Every day from 11:15 to 3:30, they go to a private high school near our house. My daughter first goes to a diving class; my older son's first class is woodworking. Then they go together to a sports camp for the whole afternoon. They will be so tanned! Summer is my least favorite season. I really can't stand the heat!

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