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6/2 11:00

A quick story.

I remember when I was at Tsinghua university, I saw this one particular male student . His body frame is very skinny, as most Chinese male students are, but something about him made me think for a second.

我记得在清华大学看到一个特别的男生。他的身体很瘦的,其实大部分男生都很瘦,但是这次这个人给我印象让我想一点。

At this time, my friend and I were wanting to go workout at the outdoor gyms. We always like working out at night because it is more cooler and there is less people outdoors. My friend is very conscious about the Chinese people around us. As a foreigner, it is not good to workout near any Chinese student because it often leads to frustration and hate.

在这个时候,我和朋友一起要去室外健身房锻炼。晚上的时候我们喜欢锻炼因天气更冷静,而且有少人出去。我的朋友很清楚周围中国人。当外国人,亲近中国学生锻炼是不好事情,因为这样会导致沮丧和仇恨。

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    6/2 11:00 (1)

    I hope my Chinese is okay? I tried my best. I wrote my English to help assist you.

    -Thank you all for your time and corrections.
    I place my current corrected works onto my blog for people to read and see.

    http://adf.ly/5747770/blogthoughts

    6/2 11:00

    A quick story.

    I remember when I was at Tsinghua university, I saw this one particular male student . His body frame is very skinny, as most Chinese male students are, but something about him made me think for a second.

    我记得在清华大学的时候,看到一个特别的男生。他的身体很瘦的,其实大部分中国的男生都很瘦,但是这次这个人给我很深的印象让我想一点

    At this time, my friend and I were wanting to go workout at the outdoor gyms. We always like working out at night because it is more cooler and there is less people outdoors. My friend is very conscious about the Chinese people around us. As a foreigner, it is not good to workout near any Chinese student because it often leads to frustration and hate.

    在这个时候,我和朋友一起去室外健身房锻炼。晚上的时候我们喜欢晚上锻炼为晚上更凉爽天气更冷静,而且有少人出去。我的朋友很在意清楚周围中国人。作为外国人,亲近中国学生锻炼的时候,有中国学生在周围是不好事情,因为这样会导致沮丧和仇恨。(语意不明,是导致了中国学生的不满,还是外国人沮丧呢?)


    另:仇恨是比较严重的词语哦。


    百度百科节选“仇恨”的解读:


    因利害矛盾而产生的很深的怨恨。


    唐 韩愈 孟郊 《城南联句》:“一笑释仇恨,百金交弟兄。”巴金 《灭亡》第四章:“然而对于我底爱,人们只拿陷害,仇恨,掠夺,欺骗来报答。” 洪深 《香稻米》第一幕:“我们 江苏 人 浙江 人从来没有仇恨。”


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