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我喺咗街,行下嘅時候我見倒王小姐,我嘅朋友,咁我話咗“王小姐!乜咁啱嘅!你好嗎?”。佢話“我好好,你呢?”然後我話“好好,有心!你喺香港咩?!”因為我好出奇。“喺阿,我返咗昨日。”然後我話“我好開心見你但係你話過我聽你去美國學,喺個度嘅大學。點解返呀?”。“我喺咗美國嘅時候我好傷心,所以我返咗嘞。” 咁我話“咁樣你要唔要禮拜五出去吓呀?”。佢話“唔好意思,聽日我唔得閒窩。你禮拜六得唔得閒呀?”,我得咗所以我話咗佢聽我得,然後佢話咗“好!我現在要走,對唔住,但係第日見啦!”。我話咗“早透,王小姐”然後我最後搭咗巴士去家。

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    More Writing Practise: 乜咁啱嘅!

    咗街,行嘅時候我見王小姐,佢喺我嘅朋友,咁我話“王小姐!乜咁啱嘅!你好嗎?”。佢話“我好好,你呢?”然後我話“我都好好,有心!你喺香港咩?!”因為我好出奇。“喺阿,我尋日昨日。”然後我話“我好開心見但係你話過我聽你去美國,喺個度嘅大學讀書。點解翻離呀?”。“我喺美國嘅時候好傷心,所以我嘞。” 咁我話“咁樣你要唔要禮拜五出去吓呀?”。佢話“唔好意思,聽日我唔得閒窩。你禮拜六得唔得閒呀?”,我得所以我話咗佢聽我得,然後佢“好!我現在要走,對唔住(唔好意思)但係第日見啦!”。我話早透拜拜,王小姐”然後我最後巴士翻屋企

     

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    More Writing Practise: 乜咁啱嘅!

    我喺街,行嘅時候我見王小姐,我嘅朋友,咁我話咗“王小姐!乜咁啱嘅!你好嗎(一般我哋話你點啊)?”。佢話“我好好,你?”然後我話“好好,有心!你喺香港咩?!”因為我好出奇。“喺阿,我尋曰返咗。”然後我話“我好開心見你,但係你話過我聽你去美國學習,喺個度嘅大學。點解返呀?”。“我喺(not all the past tense need to use 咗,it's a bit like 過in mandarin )美國嘅時候好傷心,所以我返咗嘞。” 咁我話“咁樣,你要唔要禮拜五出去吓呀?”。佢話“唔好意思,聽日我唔得閒窩。你禮拜六得唔得閒呀?”,我得閑所以我話佢聽我得,然後佢話“好!我宜家要走,對唔住,第日見啦!”。我話“早透,王小姐”然後我搭咗巴士返屋企。(whatever go home or come home we use only 返,not 去。

    More Writing Practise: 乜咁啱嘅!

    咗街,行嘅時候我見王小姐,我嘅朋友,咁我話“王小姐!乜咁啱嘅!你好嗎?”。佢話“我好好,你呢?”然後我話“好好,有心!你喺香港咩?!”因為我好出奇。“喺阿,我尋日返咗。”然後我話“我好開心見你但係你話過我聽你去美國,喺個度嘅大學。點解返呀?”。“我喺美國嘅時候我好傷心,所以我返咗。” 咁我話“咁樣你要唔要禮拜五出去呀?”。佢話“唔好意思,聽日我唔得閒窩。你禮拜六得唔得閒呀?”,我得閑,所以我話咗佢聽我得,然後佢話“好!我而家,對唔住,但係第日見啦!”。我話“早透,王小姐”然後我最後搭咗巴士返屋企

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