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Self introduction

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我叫做丹尼爾。我高興認識你
我係智利人。我四十一歳
我係已婚
我係軟件工程師
我鐘意睇書同睇戲
我鍾意學語言。我識講西班牙文,英文同世界語
我喺亞馬遜返工。我住喺西雅圖

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    Self introduction

    你好
    我叫丹尼爾。(usually you will just say 我叫,,,,佢叫,,,; 叫做refers to sth specific that you wanna emphaise its professional name or nickname.) 我高興認識你 (我好開心識到你; 高興 is not commonly used in Cantonese. It is widely used in written form or in mandarin)
    我係智利人。我四十一歳
    我係已婚 (我結咗婚)
    我係軟件工程師
    我鐘意睇書同(同埋; 同 AND 同埋 is the same meaning, just give you one more option)睇戲
    我鍾意學語言。我識講西班牙文,英文同世界語 (what do you mean?)
    我喺亞馬遜返工。我住喺西雅圖

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    Self introduction

    你好
    我叫做丹尼爾。我高興認識你 (Feel free to use your English name in Cantonese - people who have English names tend to prefer their English names.)
    我係智利人。我四十一歳
    我係已婚人士
    我係軟件工程師
    我鐘意睇書同睇戲
    我鍾意學語言。我識講西班牙文,英文同世界語(世界語 ﹣ what is this?)
    我喺亞馬遜返工。我住喺西雅圖 (again, same issue - just use the English equivalents)



    Overall, pretty good!

    你好 

    我叫做丹尼爾。我高興認識你
    我係智利人。我四十一歳
    我係已婚   我結左婚
    我係軟件工程師
    我鐘意睇書同睇戲
    我鍾意學語言。我識講西班牙文,英文同世界語
    我喺亞馬遜返工。我住喺西雅圖

     

    Hi, Daniel. Your self introduction is pretty good!

    Here is something you can improve,

    已婚 is right but it sounds very formal. It would be better if you say 我結左婚

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