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lucy's life

lucy is a poor girl.from a child.she has been lack of love.but she is very strong.she loves swimming.fishing.and read.now,she has been working.she work hard to provide for his family;.today.she seems so tired.it is bad for her body.but she is still enjoy her work.she is need earn more money to satisfy her dreams.

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    Lucy's Life

    Lucy has been poor all her life. From childhood, she has lacked love. But she is very strong. She loves swimming, fishing, and reading. Lucy works hard to provide for her family. She appears tired. It is bad for her health. But she still enjoys her work. She needs to earn more money to make her dreams come true.     


    lucy is a poor girl. and read.      now,she has been working.she work hard to provide for his family;.  today.she seems so tired.   it is bad for her body.    but she is still enjoy her work  .she is need earn more money to satisfy her dreams.

     

    Lucy's life

    Lucy is a poor girl since childhood. She has been lacking of love but she is very strong. She loves swimming, fishing and reading. Now, she is working hard to provide for his family. However today, she seems so tired. Working hard has become bad for her body but she still enjoys her work. She needs to earn more money to satisfy her dreams.

    lucy's life

    Lucy is a poor girl since childhood. She has been lacking of love but she is very strong. She loves swimming, fishing and reading. Now, she is working hard to provide for his family. However today, she seems so tired. Working hard has become bad for her body but she still enjoys her work. She needs to earn more money to satisfy her dreams.

    lucy's life

    lucy is a poor girl.from a child.she has been lack of love.but she is very strong.she loves swimming.fishing.and read  reading.now,she has been working.she work works hard to provide for his her family;.today.she seems so tired.it is bad for her body.but she is still enjoy her work.she is need earn more money to satisfy her dreams.

    Lucy's Life

    Lucy is a poor girl from. Since her a childhood she has been lacked of love. Nevertheless, but she is very strong. She loves swimming, fishing and reading. now Recently she has been working she work hard to provide for his her family. Today she seems so tired. It is bad for her body health, but she is still enjoys her work. She is needs to earn more money to satisfy achieve her dreams.

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