You can actually sing very well! Without knowing the lyrics, it would be hard to understand all of it even if it was sung by a native Hungarian. It's not all about pronunciation: sound quality, musical effects and noises can also make it difficult to make out individual sounds from a song. What I could hear and understand for the first time was comprehensible. There were some other words which I could understand after a bit of hesitation.
I'm trying to point out to a few possible mistakes. If I could hear it right, the following vowels are causing you some trouble: a, ö, ő, ü, ű. In one instance, you pronounced the word "nagy" so that it sounds like "nyár". (See the words "nagy lépés", if I'm not mistaken.) "Ly" is pronounced exactly as "j" and not as an "L" followed by a "j". In the spoken language, there is no difference between them.
As a matter of fact, I'm very impressed. Well done!
Kedves Devin!
I've just listened to your song and I loved it:) I like your voice and I also liked the Hungarian words that I was able to understand:) I'm writing you down now what I understood or how I understood the lyrics.
So, the words that I understood are pronounced well! The rest I couldn't understand, so you could try to work on those words a bit:) Having said that, we know that it's often very difficult to understand everything in a song, even if a nativer speaker (singer:) sings it, so all in all I think that you did a great job, especially if we consider that you have just started to learn Hungarian:) Keep it up!
Krisztina
"Holt tenger...hegyeken át....tudom, hogy.....Olyan ügyes (?) volt, lehet.....A lelkemre....nagyon nehéz, Legyen hó, még sose volt hasonló, olyan lelket mozdító. Bár tudnám....a szívemben a jég...a távolból. És most .....legyen hát minden jég és hó...ugye jó, ugye jó, hogy a ....nem sír ....többé már...Nyár...és otthon vagy. Ami volt nem fáj...A szívem hozzád...minden dalt
A lelkem...A hónap (holnap?) rám talál...ugye jó, ugye jó, ahogy elvesz a fénylő hó...Nézz most rám, minden más....de ma holnap van és...a szívemen a jég....
