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World Cup!!! (Netherlans vs. Argentina) I woke up early morning for watching World Cup. Today There was a semi-final match, Netherlands aginst Argentina. Actucally I went on Brazil. But Brazil already lost thier world cup. T.T Germany was really strong... I saw All Brazilian's dream disapppeared in six minutes... In six mimutes, Germany scored four goals... At the moment, The match was all over.... Most of Brazilan was crying during the match.. I felt really sorry.. Speaking of today's game, It was a close game!! They gave and took each other attack. Finally they went to penalty shootout and then Agentina won the match. After match, Robben went to his crying son. I guess his son was crying because of father's loss. Robben soothed a crying son. At that time, The Caster said " Oh... sorry... Not your fault" This scene was really moving.. ㅜㅜㅜ and overlapped Brazil defender Luiz's interview with crying. Anyway This World Cup's everygame is dramtic. I'm rearlly looking forward to watching final match.
Jul 9, 2014 11:55 PM
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World Cup!!! (Netherlans vs. Argentina)

I woke up early this morning for watching to watch the World Cup.
Today There it was a the semi-final match between Netherlands aginst and Argentina.

Actucally Actually I went on to Brazil (브라질에 갔어요?).

Actually I support Brazil (브라질 지지자예요?)

But Brazil already lost [thier the world cup] T.T= <em>You already mentionned the World Cup before so you don't need to repeat it again. When you say "Brazil lost" we know it's the World Cup</em>.  

Germany was really strong... I saw All every Brazilians' dream disapppeared within six minutes... within six minutes, Germany scored four goals... At the moment that time, The match was all already over.... Most of Brazilians was were (plural form) crying during the match.. I felt really sorry..

Speaking of today's game, It was a close game!! (/ it was a close one = avoids the repetition of "game") 
They gave and took each other attack. = They striked each others in turn
Finally In the end they went to penalty shootout concluded the match on penalty kicks and (then) Agentina won (the match).


After the match, Robben went to his crying son. I guess his son was crying because of his father's defeat (loss = loss, is when you lost someone because this person died. You say "sorry for your loss"). Robben soothed consoled his a crying son.

At that time, The Caster said " Oh... sorry... Not your fault" (I don't know who is The Caster ^^)
This scene was really moving.. ㅜㅜㅜ and overlapped Brazil defender Luiz's interview with crying. (I don't understand sorry) 

Anyway This World Cup's everygame is dramtic. => Every single game of this World Cup is dramatic

I'm rearlly really looking forward to watching the final match.

July 11, 2014

World Cup!!! (Netherlans vs. Argentina)

I woke up early morning for watching World Cup.
Today There was a semi-final match, Netherlands aginst Argentina.

Actucally I was cheering for Brazil. But Brazil already lost their world cup. T.T Germany was really strong... I saw All Brazilian's dream disapppeared in six minutes... In six minutes, Germany scored four goals... At that moment, the match was all over.... Most of the Brazilans was crying during the match.. I felt really sorry..

Speaking of today's game, It was a close game!!
They gave and took each other attack.
Finally they went to penalty shootout and then Agentina won the match.

After match, Robben went to his crying son. I guess his son was crying because of father's loss. Robben soothed a crying son. At that time, The Caster said " Oh... sorry... Not your fault"
This scene was really moving.. ㅜㅜㅜ and overlapped Brazil defender Luiz's interview with crying.

Anyway This World Cup, every game is dramtic.
I'm really looking forward to watching the final match.

July 10, 2014
Think about rewriting this notebook entry. Remove the paragraph about Brazil. You are writing about Netherlands versus Argentina. Try to describe Robben. What position does he play? You wrote Caster - I think you mean newscaster. Do not worry about trying to use correct punctuation. Just write what the newscaster said. I like "moving" as your word choice. I'm looking forward to the final match too!
July 10, 2014
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