Sebastián
Long boring day at work. Today was a boring day. Because all my workmates went to work outside and I worked all day in the company garage. The big problem was that my workmates took my tools, and I couldn't finish to repair the machines, I was waiting them at the afternoon but never came. I tried to make a rustic tools with a iron piece, but it was impossible, i'm not a blacksmith and now i know it. From now, I will start to hide my stuff. If you want, you can help me correcting this little text or suggest something, I will be very grateful. Bye =)
Jul 11, 2014 2:01 AM
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Long, boring day at work.

Today was a boring day. Because because all my workmates went to work outside and while I worked all day in the company garage. The big problem was that my workmates took my tools, and I couldn't finish to repairing the machines,. I was waiting waited for them at in the afternoon but they never came returned.
I tried to make a rustic construct makeshift tools with from a iron a piece of iron, but it was impossible,. I'm not a no blacksmith and now i know it as I now know. From now on, I will start to hide hiding my stuff.

If you want, you can help me correcting this little text or suggest something, I will would be very grateful. Bye =)

July 11, 2014
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Long boring day at work.

Today was a boring day, because all my workmates went to work outside and I worked
all day in the company garage. The big problem was that my workmates took my tools,
and I couldn't finish repairing the machines. I was waiting for them all the afternoon but they never came.
I tried to make a rustic tool with a piece of iron, but it was impossible, I'm not a
blacksmith and now I know it. From now on, I will start hiding my stuff.

 

Good work!

July 11, 2014
1

Long boring day at work.

Today was a boring day because all my workmates went to work outside and I worked
all day in the company garage. The big problem was that my workmates took my tools,
and I couldn't finish repairing the machines. I was waiting for them in the afternoon but they never came.
I tried to make a rustic tool with an iron piece, but it was impossible. I'm not a
blacksmith and now I know it. From now, I will start to hide my stuff.

If you want, you can help me correcting this little text or suggest something, I will be very grateful. Bye =)

July 11, 2014
hahah! very funny!
July 11, 2014
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