chuanshi
失眠者的希望 我一直看天空,找一个贼星。但是今天明星全都把自己藏,我的希望又不能实现,我又失望了。没有贼星,就流一滴眼泪。
Jul 11, 2014 4:20 PM
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失眠者的希望

 

我一直着天空,看看有沒有找一个贼星, 但 蒼穹全無是今天明星全都把自己藏???[I'm only guessing] 我的希望又不能实现又失望了。没有,就流一滴眼泪[水]

 

If suggest if you want to write such beautiful lines, you should provide an English version too.  At least, you have another source for us to guess.  I used 流(flowing) because it is more poetic than 賊 (thief/robber).  Beautiful imagery! I shall use it in the future.  Thanks!

July 11, 2014
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