失眠者的希望
我一直望看着天空,看看有沒有找一个贼流星, 但 蒼穹全無. 是今天明星全都把自己藏???,[I'm only guessing] 我的希望又不能实现了,我又失望了。没有流贼星兒,就流下一滴眼泪[水]。
If suggest if you want to write such beautiful lines, you should provide an English version too. At least, you have another source for us to guess. I used 流(flowing) because it is more poetic than 賊 (thief/robber). Beautiful imagery! I shall use it in the future. Thanks!