1: How to balance the period of studying and playing? 2: a video tells the truth of getting fat. Topic one I bought the first computer in the first year of my university life. At first, the reason w

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1: How to balance the period of studying and playing? 2: a video tells the truth of getting fat. Topic one I bought the first computer in the first year of my university life. At first, the reason was that teachers often assigned homework on the Internet and we needed to submit our homework. However, in the free time, I was very curious about the all-powerful Internet and played everyday. Therefore, I ignored my course and now I really regretted. When I bought a smart phone, I was addicted to play it and my vision was decreasing. I want to change myself. I think of a lot of ways to give up computer and cell phone so I begin to plant flowers and buy many books. I will add doing exercises into my free time. On italki, I see so many hard-working people and I decide to learn from them! In my opinion, the way to balance the period of playing and studying is finding a goal and create a good environment of study. It is better to make some friends who study hard. After that, it is necessary to give up the bad habits and force on positive activities. The most important thing is insisting! Topic two: Today I find a good video which analyzes the key and truth of getting overweight. There are about genes, heredity and hormone. http://v.163.com/movie/2013/5/B/Q/M8TIVQK2I_M8TJ01JBQ.html I think the video is very useful.

Jul 13, 2014 3:05 PM

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1: How to balance the period of studying and playing? 2: A video that tells the truth of about getting fat.

Topic one
I bought The first computer I bought in was during the first year of my university life. At first, the reason was that because teachers often assigned homework on the Internet and we needed it to submit our homework. However, in the my free time,(的逗号没有必要.) I was very curious about the all-powerful Internet and played everyday. Therefore, I ignored my course and now I really regretted it. When I bought a smart phone, I was addicted to playing it and my vision was decreasing. I want to change myself. I think thought of a lot of ways to give up my computer and cell phone, so and I begin to plant flowers and buy many a lot of books. I will add also plan on doing exercises into my free time. On italki, I see so many hard-working people and I decided to learn from them! In my opinion, the best way to balance the period of time playing and studying is to finding a goal and createing a good environment of to study in. It is besttter to make some friends who study hard, too. After that, it is becomes necessary to give up the bad habits and forces focus on positive activities. The most important thing is insisting*! *"insisting" doesn't quite make sense here, did you mean something along the lines of "being persistant?"

Topic two:
Today I find a good video which analyzes the key factors and truth of getting overweight. Theyre are about genes, heredity and hormones. http://v.163.com/movie/2013/5/B/Q/M8TIVQK2I_M8TJ01JBQ.html
I think thise video is very useful.

(Your English is so good! Congrats!)

July 13, 2014

1: How to balance the period of studying and playing?

Topic one
I bought my first computer on the first year of my university life. At first, teachers often assigned homework, so we had to search the Internet. Later we submitted our papers. However, in my free time, I was very curious about the all-powerful Internet and played every_day. Therefore, I ignored my course and now I really regret about that. When I bought a smart phone, I became addicted to playing with it. Now my vision has started to blur. I want to change my behavior. I've been pondering a lot of ways to keep my distance from both my computer and cell phone, so I've started to plant flowers and buy many books. I will add doing exercise into my free time schedule. On italki, I see so many hard-working people and I've decided to learn from them! In my opinion, the way to balance the periods of playing and studying is finding a goal and create a good study environment. It is better to make some friends who study hard. After that, it is necessary to kick the bad habits and force oneself into positive activities. The most important thing is persevering! :)

2: A video tells the truth about getting fat

Topic two
Today I found a good video which analyzes the key and truth of getting overweight, for example genes, heredity traits and hormone imbalance. http://v.163.com/movie/2013/5/B/Q/M8TIVQK2I_M8TJ01JBQ.html
I think the video is very useful. :)

July 13, 2014

I bought the first computer in the first year of my university life.

I bought my first computer during my freshman year of university.

However, in the free time, I was very curious about the all-powerful Internet and played everyday. Therefore, I ignored my course and now I really regretted.

However, in my free time, I was very curious about the all-powerful Internet and played (what? what did you play?) everyday. Therefore, I ignored my course and now I really regret it.

July 13, 2014

So funny to read about the issue of keeping the right balance between studying and playing after reading at <a href="http://customwritingcompany.com/blog/student-wedding-during-studying-period/">custom writing company</a> about the balance between studying and personal relationships namely a wedding! For sure studying is should be the first priority but can you imagine what it takes to keep it at the level when you are preparing to a wedding?

April 1, 2016

There is one problem with addiction. You stop beeing addicted to computers and phones and you begin to be addicted to something else, for example to reading a lot of books. learning languages and so on. The point? Addiction to "something" remains.

July 13, 2014

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