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My family (correct me ) We are a big family , Mum and dad are Separate from the each other , I have four sister and i'm the middle , The largest two sisters married, when my dad separated he married again and he has got a son , also my mother married when we was a young but she not given birth, ٍSo we become 5 sisters and a brother , In the begin this status was difficult of us with this trouble and strife in disconnected family but now we are able to Live in happiness so i feel great and tomorrow will be good
Jul 22, 2014 6:31 AM
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My Family ( Please correct me )

We are a big family, Mum and Dad are separated from the each other , I have four sisters and I'm in  the middle. , The largest My older two sisters are married, when my dad separated left he remarried again and he has got a son. , also My mother remarried when we were was a young but she did not have any more children.not given birth, ٍSo we became 5 sisters and a brother. , In the begining this status situation was difficult of for us. There was with this trouble and strife in our disconnected family, but now we are able to live in peace happiness so I feel great and tomorrow will be good.

July 22, 2014
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My family (correct me )

We are a big family. My Mom and Dad are separated from the each other. I have four sisters and I'm in the middle. The largest My two older sisters are married. When my dad separated, he married again and he has got had a son. Also, my mother married when we was a young but she not given birth (sorry, I do not understand this sentence). ٍSo we became 5 sisters and a brother. In the beginning, this status was difficult of for us with this because of troubles and strife in our disconnected family, but now we are able to live in happiness. So, I feel great and tomorrow will be good.

July 22, 2014
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