Rest in Spain I'm in Spain for a week and now I'm sure that I'll never rest this way one more time. I'm not a lazy cow (very is a bar with this name), I like studying, working, but.. But here people a

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Rest in Spain I'm in Spain for a week and now I'm sure that I'll never rest this way one more time. I'm not a lazy cow (very is a bar with this name), I like studying, working, but.. But here people are resting, swimming, sleeping on the beach. I thought there would be funnier. My friend hoped to meet girls from UK and so one, but there're only spanish and old people. Bua.. Yesterday I was climbing at the mountain. THAT was funny. So I think, I need a rest only for 2-3 days with much activisity and sport. The best way is to visit places without tourists. That's what I want.

Jul 22, 2014 8:33 PM

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A Restful time in Spain

I'm have been in Spain for a week and now I'm sure that I'll never have a rest like this again this way one more time. I'm not a lazy cow (very is a bar with this name), I like studying and working, but... But here people are resting, swimming and sleeping on the beach. I thought there would be more exciting things happening funnier.
My friend hoped to meet girls from UK and so one, but there're are only Spanish girls and old people. Bua..
Yesterday I was climbing a at the mountain. THAT That was funny. So I think I need a rest of only for 2-3 days which included many activities with much activisity and lots of sport. It is the best way is to visit places without tourists.
That's what I want.

Good!

-When you list things you should use commas between all items apart from the penultimate and final ones - apples, bananas, pears, peaches and chocolate

-The contraction there're doesn't exist

-The phrase a lazy cow is somewhat insulting and it dones't fit where you've tried to use it here

-All nationalities in English are proper nouns and need capital letters

Hope this helps!

July 22, 2014

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