Rive
hello alaric I'm ready to go to bed, I had a busy day but tomorrow I'll have another busy day. usually in july my job is more relax because to much people take their vacation. I'll to take my vacation in two weeks, I have ready my air ticket to go to Spain, it is so expensive One thousand tree hundred dollars, what do you think about it. you work hard during the year and then in five seconds, your money disappears the life is like this work, work and work but always we need to make time to rest ok, good night everybody, and see you tomorrow.
Jul 23, 2014 1:53 AM
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Rive, next time we get together, let's talk about punctuation and capitalization. OK? Remind me, please, if I forget.


Hello Alaric,

I'm ready to go to bed. I had a busy day but tomorrow I'll have another busy day. Usually in July my job is more relaxed because many people take their vacations. I'll be taking my vacation in two weeks. I already have my plane ticket to go to Spain. It is so expensive. One thousand three hundred dollars! What do you think about that? You work hard during the year and then in five seconds, your money disappears. Life is like this: work, work and work. But we always need to make time to rest too.

 

OK, good night everybody, and see you tomorrow.

 

Your writing is like your personality: vibrant. :-)

July 23, 2014
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