Barney Ryu
please correct any wrong parts. :) Tonight I drank my friends. we met in Australia about 1 month ago. During our talking, we talked about happiness. I've been in Australia since 1st june. When I was in Korean, I had a permanent job with high salary. However I didn't happy during my working. Besides I did't like company's curture. After working, We went to bar and drank alchol very heavy everyday. Acutually I like to drink alchol, but I could't endure anymore. Everyday morning, I cound't smile for my mother because I was drunken. Back to my working, I couldn't show mom smiling face except for only one time my first day in company. Therefore I decided to quit my job for my happiness. I really want to show smiling face to mom. Furthermore I want to be happy guy. We talked like this and other friends agreed my decision. Then, the subject changed from happiness to mom. My friend said that he has supported his parents financially for about 5 years and sometimes he is proud himself. However one day he realized that his mother had supported for about 5 times but she always had a burden to his son because she don't give his son more good things. When I heard this story from my friend, I remembered my mom and really missed her. Mom always give his family unconditional love. Probably I can't give back totally to mom love I've received. Mom's love is infinite. Tomorrow I'm going to call mom and say love !!! This is my diary. ^^;;; please correct any wrong parts. Thank you in advance. :)
Jul 23, 2014 12:21 PM
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please correct any wrong parts. :)

Tonight I drank with my friends. We met in Australia about 1 month ago. During our talking, we talked about happiness.

I've been in Australia since 1st June. When I was in Korean Korea, I had a permanent job with a high salary. However I didn't wasn't happy during my working with my job. Besides, I didn't like the company's curture culture. After working, we went to bar [a bar or bars] and drank alchohol very heavily everyday every day (2 words). Acutually I like to drink alchohol, but I couldn't endure  ['endure it' is ok, but 'stand it' or 'cope with it' sounds better here] anymore. Everyday morning, I cound't couldn't {short for 'could not'] smile for my mother because I was drunken. [Oh! That's not good!] Back to my working, I couldn't show mom a smiling face except for only one time - my first day in the company.

Therefore I decided to quit my job for my happiness. I really want to show a smiling face to mom. Furthermore I want to be a happy guy.  [Good idea!]


We talked like this and other friends agreed with my decision. Then, the subject changed from happiness to mom. My friend said that he has supported his parents financially for about 5 years and sometimes he is proud himself. However one day he realized that his mother had supported him for about 5 times [not quite sure what you mean here] but she was always had a burden to his her son because she don't didn't give his her son more good things. When I heard this story from my friend, I remembered my mom and really missed her. Mom always give his her family unconditional love. Probably I can't give back totally to mom the love I've received. Mom's love is infinite. Tomorrow I'm going to call mom and say, "I love you!!!"

This is my diary. ^^;;;
please correct any wrong parts.
Thank you in advance. :)

 

Great writing.  :)  Ahhh!  Lucky mom!  (Here in the UK, we mostly spell it mum - I think US spelling is mom, so maybe Australian is too?)

July 23, 2014
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