John
I would like to learn French Apparently, it's extremely important for young people to master a new more foreign language, especially for those who work for multinational companies.Apart from English, I'd like to learn French, which was the second widest used language, I suppose. These days, there are numerous study resources available on the Internet. I would download some of them to study. In addition, since learning a language means using it, so the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers. Now, I have few change to chat with a foreigner face by face, but I would find a friend online to talk for practice. Although French has the same alphabet as English, but their pronunciations are rather different, which might be a difficult during my study course. If I mastered French very well, I would be able to further my education in France, or find a new job in a France company; I mean I'd have more job opportunities and have a greater career development. This is why I would like to learn this language.
Jul 23, 2014 3:14 PM
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I would like to learn French

Apparently, it's extremely important for young people to master a new more foreign language, especially for those who work for multinational companies. Apart from English, I'd like to learn French, which was is the second widest most widely used language, I suppose think.
These days, there are numerous study resources available on the Internet. I would could download some of them to study. In addition, since learning a language means using it, so the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers. Now, I have few change opportunities to chat with a foreigner face by to face, but I would could find a friend online to talk for practice practice speaking.
Although French has the same alphabet as English, but their pronunciations are rather different, which might be a difficult during my study course.
If I mastered French very well, I would be able to further my education in France, or find a new job in a France French company. I mean That would mean I'd have more job opportunities and have a greater career development. This is why I would like to learn this language.

 

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Hi Hit. Good luck on your journey learning French and English! Here are some notes to help you improve your writing:

It sounds strange to say a "more foreign language". Normally, something is either foreign or it isn't. Also, to say "a new foreign language" sounds strange, because if it is foreign to you, then it must also be new to you. Though it would make sense in a slightly different context: if you said "I've already learnt English, and now I want to learn a new foreign language!"

"Since learning a language means using it, so the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers." When you use "since" at the start of this sentence, you don't have to use "so" to link it to the following phrase. Alternatively, leave out "since" and just use "so".

"Since learning a language means using it, the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers."

"Learning a language means using it, so the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers."

It's a similar thing with the sentence where you've used "Although" and "but". You only need one of them.

Have a great day!

July 23, 2014

I would like to learn French

 

Apparently, it's extremely important for young people to master a new more foreign languages, especially for those who work for multinational companies. Apart from English, I'd like to learn French, which is the second widest used language, I suppose.


These days, there are numerous study resources available on the Internet. I would download some of them to study. In addition, since learning a language means using it, so the best way to master a language would be to practice with native speakers. Now, I have few chances to chat with a foreigner face by face, but I would find a friend online to talk to for practice.
Although French has the same alphabet as English, but their pronunciations are rather different, which might be a difficult during my study course.
If I really mastered French very well, I would be able to further my education in France, or find a new job at a French company; I mean I'd have more job opportunities and have a greater chance for career development. This is why I would like to learn this language.

 

You speak English very well. I'm sure you will master French!

July 23, 2014
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