Ángel Guirao
A love letter This is the first time that I've tried to write poetry in english. Love is the theme and the result is a super corny poem xd. It was very funny, but I found it very difficult. "Here I am, spilling my heart to you, writing a love letter because I've grown attached to you. There's something I've got to say, I felt too lonely without you. We were joyful every time, spreading love to everyone. I've heard you found another man, but I'm not fretting, I know you will be back. I want to apologize because I wan't the prince you dreamed about, but trust me baby, I loved you at your darkest. Ask me if I'll spend tonight together, you know the answer baby, you are my light brightest. You will be the only one, I hope you still remember the beat of my heart. I will be waiting for you all my life, I'm afraid of crying the rest of the nights".
Jul 23, 2014 4:51 PM
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A love letter

This is the first time that I've tried to write poetry in English. Love is the theme and the result is a super corny poem xd. It was very funny, but I found it very difficult.

"Here I am, spilling my heart to you,
writing a love letter because I've grown attached to you.
There's something I've got to say, I felt too lonely without you.

We were joyful every time, spreading love to everyone.
I've heard you found another man, but I'm not fretting, I know you will be back.

I want to apologize because I wasn't the prince you dreamed about,
but trust me baby, I loved you at your darkest.
Ask me if I'll spend tonight together,
you know the answer baby, you are my light brightest light.

You will be the only one,
I hope you still remember the beat of my heart.
I will be waiting for you all my life,
I'm afraid of crying the rest of the my nights".

 

<em>(Nice job!)</em>

July 23, 2014
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