Marta Mayfer
Me. A little bibliography of me. Hello, My name's Marta. I want to learn English a little more. I studied English in high school, but for a year I don't practise it. So I have forgiven it. I love writing stories and read selfhelp's books. I am studying Criminology in Granada's university. I love my degree. We learn Psychology, Medicine, Right, Antropology and some criminal theorys. Living in Granada is the best decision that I have done. If you want to see monument, you will do it. If you want to go to the party, you will do it. Granada have a lot of beautiful places and some old coffes shops. My porpouse of this summer is write a scrapbook. I hope that you could help me with my English. And, now that you know more about me, I want give thanks.
Jul 23, 2014 8:53 PM
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Me. A little bibliography of me. My Autobiography

Hello,
My name's is Marta. I want to learn more English a little more. I studied English during high school, but I haven't practiced for a year I don't practise it. So I have forgoten forgiven it.
I love writing stories and read self help's books. I am studying Criminology in at the university of Granada's university. I love my degree. We learn about Psychology, Medicine, Rights, Antropology and some criminal theorys.
Living in Granada is the best decision that I have ever made done. If you want to see a monument then this is the place to be you will do it. If you want to go to the partying then this is the place to be you will do it. Granada has have a lot of beautiful places and some old coffes shops.
My aim porpouse of this for the summer is make write a scrapbook.
I hope that you could can help me with my English. And, now that you know more about me, I want give to thanks you.

 

Good! Very good for a first entry

-You can't write <em>my name's ____ </em>as it makes no sense. You need to write <em>my name is</em> ___

-In English we study <em>at</em> university and we write it as <em>I study at the university of Liverpool</em>

-We learn <em>about</em> things

-We <em>make</em> decisions

<address>-A place <em>has</em> things (3rd person singular conjugation) and <em>places </em>have<em> things</em></address><address> </address>
July 23, 2014

Me. A little bibliography of me.

Hello,
My name is Marta. I want to improve my English. I studied English in high school, but I haven´t practised it for a year so I have forgotten a lot of it.
I love writing stories and reading selfhelp books. I am studying Criminology at the univsersity in Granada. I love my degree. We learn Psychology, Medicine, Right, Antropology and some criminal theories.
Living in Granada was the best decision that I´ve made. If you want to see a monument, you´ll do it. If you want to go to a party, you´ll do it. Granada has a lot of beautiful places and some old coffee shops.
My aim for this summer is to make a scrapbook.
I hope that you can help me with my English. Now that you know more about me, I want to say thanks!

July 23, 2014
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