Why do I want to travel

Well... I've always wanted to travel and live abroad. I'm that kind of person that doesn't like to feel locked up (held down). I want to discover the world that is outside...Yes, I know it sounds really corny, but it's what I think!... :)
But, I don't want to travel or go abroad just for fun. I want to study and do my career practice in the EU or another country while I live God's purpose for myself. I mean, I love Him and I know that I can do so many things being outside...


Well... I will write something later.. I hope somebody reads it! hahah!

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Why do I want to travel

Well... I'd always wanted to travel and live abroad. I'm that kind of person that doesn't like to feel confined. I want to discover more of the world that is outside...Yes, I know it sounds too much really (or you can use super instead of really )corny but it's what I think!... :)
But, I don't want to travel or going abroad just for fun. I want to study and make my career practice in the EU or another country meanwhile I live the purpose God's intended for me. I mean, I love Him and I know that I can do so many things being outside...


Well... I will write something later.. I hope somebody will read it! hahah!


Buen trabajo! Escribes inglés muy bien, hay aspectos que neccestias a mejorar, pero puedo entender tu oración perfectamente.