Carmen
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Human birds While some people swing their entire lives on the same branch, some others stay in a constant flight. If I had to put myself in one of these two groups, I guess it would be already too late to get a nest near by... http://carmencorrea.hatenablog.com/entry/2014/07/24/194332 Hi! I'm posting my daily writing exercises on this blog, come in to continue reading, and if you find some mistakes or you feel like giving me some feedback, feel free to write below! :)
Jul 24, 2014 10:45 AM
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While some people swing their entire lives on the same branch, some others stay in  a  constant flight. <em>(what about the in-betweeners, the excluded middle?)</em> If I had to put myself in one of these two groups, I guess it would already be already <em>(just word order)</em> too late to get a nest nearby... <em>(single word)</em>

http://carmencorrea.hatenablog.com/entry/2014/07/24/194332

Hi! I'm posting my daily writing exercises on this blog, come in to continue reading, and if you find some mistakes or you feel like giving me some feedback, feel free to write below! :)

July 24, 2014
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