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my vacation tadoy is August 1st. The weather today is sunny. In the morning,I went to school. In the afternoon,I was at home do my homework. After dinner, I went to dance class with my sister. This is my day. It's very easy!
Jul 24, 2014 2:47 PM
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My Vacation

Today is August 1st. The weather today was sunny. In the morning, I went to school. In the afternoon, I was at home doing my homework. After dinner, I went to dance class with my sister.
That was my day. It was very easy!

 

Remember to put a space after commas or periods.

Very good!

July 24, 2014

My Summer Vacation

Today is August 1st and the weather today is sunny. In the morning I went to school but in the afternoon, I was stayed at home to do/doing my homework. After dinner, I went to dance class with my sister.
This is my day - it's very easy simple!

 

<em>Very simple sentences can be made more interesting by use of conjunctions 连词 (and, but, so, because ...). What will you do in your long shujia 暑假?</em>

July 25, 2014
You sure it is August ?
July 25, 2014
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