The worst experience during my life In the first year of my middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which I felt terrible. I attended middle school in my hometown, a small town in southern Chi

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The worst experience during my life In the first year of my middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which I felt terrible. I attended middle school in my hometown, a small town in southern China, during the early 1990s. Because my home was relatively far from the school, I was boarding at that time. The school was so poor that there weren't enough beds for all the pupils. Since we were in the lowest grade, two of us shared a bed. The beds were old-fashioned bunk ones. It was even hard to turn over during sleeping. You can imagine how depressed I was to use this bed with another boy. what is worse, no one washed bed sheets for us, and I had to take home and asked my mother wash them once a sememster. As.As a result, the hygiene was terrible. In addition to this, I remember I was not as strong as the student who I shared the bed with, so he often bullied me, and even did not allow me to sleep in bed. In all, that was the worst sharing experience I've had in my life.

Jul 24, 2014 3:18 PM

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July 25, 2014

The worst experience during in/of my life

In During the/my first year of my middle school, I had to shared a the bed with a classmate. I hated it., which I felt terrible. I attended It was in the early 1990s. Even though middle school was in my small hometown, a small town in southern China, during the early 1990s. Because my home it was was relatively far from home and so it was the school, I was boarding school for me at that time. The school place was so poor that there weren't enough beds for all the pupils. Since we were in the lowest grade, two of us shared a bed.

They beds were old-fashioned bunk bedsones. It was even hard to turn over during while in sleeping. You can imagine How depressing it was for me I was to use this to share a bed with another boy. what is worse, The worst is that there was no one to washed the bed sheets for us. and Only once in a semester it was brought back I had to take home and asked my mother to be washed by mother. them once a sememster. As.As a result, Can you imagine how the hygienic it was? terrible.

In addition to all thesethis, I remember I was not as strong as the student who I shared the my bedmate with, so he who often bullied me, and even did not won't allow me to sleep in my rightful place bed.

In all, that was the Thank God, my worst sharing experience so far! I've had in my life.

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July 24, 2014

In the first year of my middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which I felt terrible. --> change to "In my first year of middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which I really hated." I wouldn't use "terrible" like that. You could say, "In my first year of middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which was a terrible experience." If you say you "felt terrible" about something, it usually means you did something wrong and felt really bad about it. 你很后悔你的一个错误。 That sounds like an awful experience!

July 24, 2014

The worst experience during my life

In the first year of my middle school, I shared a bed with a classmate, which I felt terrible. I attended middle school in my hometown, a small town in southern China, during the early 1990s. Because my home was relatively far from the school, I was boarding at that time. The school was so poor that there weren't enough beds for all the pupils. Since we were in the lowest grade, two of us shared a bed.
The beds were old-fashioned bunk beds. ones. It was even hard to turn over during while sleeping. You can imagine how depressed I was to have to use this bed with another boy. What was worse, no one washed the bed sheets for us. and I had to take them home and asked so that my mother could wash them once a sememster. As.As a result, the hygiene was terrible.
In addition to this, I remember I was not as strong as the student who I shared the bed with, so he often bullied me, and he even did not allow me to sleep in bed.
In all, that was the worst sharing experience I've had in my life.