DC Carter
Provide some tiny help with correction, please Abstract. This article analyzes the political values of modern society. It reveals the relationship of political values with political consciousness and political culture during the revolution. Through the prism of the democratic ideal defined problems and outlined general tendencies, transforming the national value system as a prerequisite for the establishment of the harmonious environment values. Analysis of the political values of society has promoted a holistic set of scientific methods, such as dialectical, comparative political, systematic and others. As a result, political values of (country name) during the revolution are determined.
Jul 24, 2014 8:07 PM
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Provide some tiny help with correction, please

Abstract. This article analyzes the political values of modern society. It reveals [explains?] the relationship of [between?] political values with [and?] political consciousness and political culture during the revolution. Through the prism of the democratic ideal, [the grammar goes wrong here] defined problems and outlined general tendencies, transforming the national value system as a prerequisite for the establishment of the harmonious environment values. Analysis of the political values of society has promoted a holistic set of scientific methods, such as dialectical, comparative political, systematic and others. As a result, political values of (country name) during the revolution are determined.

 

<em>This is hard to correct because the language is high-level and very conceptual.  It's also a very important document!  I would recommend you discuss the theme of your PhD in plain English with a tutor so that they can help you better.  I am not sure if my suggested corrections accurately reflect the sense you intend.  So please beware!  </em>

July 24, 2014
That's just an outline of my thesis, translated into English. Anyway, thank you for the attention you paid!
July 24, 2014
Grammatically it seems ok. What you mean is a little complicated by using too many complicated words and very long sentences.
July 24, 2014
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