One day in my Country (Venezuela) There is a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. Does not matter. There a many beautiful places, beachs, mountains. The life is very

María Daniela

One day in my Country (Venezuela) There is a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. Does not matter. There a many beautiful places, beachs, mountains. The life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but i love Venezuela.

Jul 24, 2014 10:28 PM

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About my Country (Venezuela)

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

Hola Maria! Michael was perfect with his corrections. I think you both missed this tiny correction. 99% of the time you do not put a comma after a Conjunction. And never one before and one after.

( ,but, )

Otherwise, great Job!

Rob

July 24, 2014

About my Country (Venezuela)

There are a lot of good people in my country, but, the the government is very bad. But it does not matter. There are many beautiful places, beaches, and mountains. Life is very expensive here. So many people want to emigrate, but I love Venezuela.

<em>Bien hecho!, Michael</em>

July 24, 2014

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